Hello I've been gone awhile, but now that i have some free time i thought i'd continue my stories. Anywho if you have a question or suggestion just lemme know
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Hello and welcome newcomers to the Elemental School for the Defenders of Equestria, a new combat school that trains the next generation of defenders against the dreaded creatures of darkness. But when the new batch of trainees arrive strange things began to happen, what does that mean for the school and why is the weirdness focused on the new team from Ponyville.
Pre-read/edited by the awesome FaNarchy without whom I may still be on chapter two.
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six team out of sixty? that's ridiculously exclusive isn't it?
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Yes I know it is a bit ridiculous, when I first wrote the chapter I was not thinking of the ridiculousness of the number
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a more believable selection process would be twenty teams or ten if their really selective.
But it's your story and I'll let you write it the way you want.
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I edit it to eleven and I like the fact you actually told me I did something that seems kinda ridiculous.
Sorry I took a million years to get to this story; I was busy with my own stories and other stuff. Anyway, this story's looking pretty good so far. It's a nice setup for what could be a great story. Scootaloo kinda reminds me of Serena from Sailor Moon (Which keep in mind that I only saw the first episode of.); where she's ditzy yet still optimistic despite her forgetful nature. I may watch more of Sailor Moon, but I can say that she certainly entertained me; she was easily my favorite part of the chapter.
Overall, I'll give this chapter a 6.5/10, as for a first chapter, it managed to do it's job well.
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Thanks happy you liked it
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I'll certainly read the other chapters when I have the time. Another thing I like is how it kinda reminds me of Attack on Titan, as the part where they attack Timberwolves for some reason reminds me of when Eren and the others fight the titans. Only, I haven't seen anything of the former yet. I'm certainly reading more though.
Why did you stop writing this story?
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Just had some writers block and just stuff going on in my life. I have been working on the next chapter it should be done soon...hopefully.