Hello I've been gone awhile, but now that i have some free time i thought i'd continue my stories. Anywho if you have a question or suggestion just lemme know
The E.S.D.E. is the most prestigious school in Equestria. Founded by the Elements of Harmony to train future defenders of Equestria to protect against the things that go bump in the night, it is an honor to attend.
Follow the CMC as they face a deadly entrance exam, the duo who made their life hard, a plot to destroy the school, and a villain they never expected to face.
The story continues in The Defenders of Equestria
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Sounds interesting so far. Guessing Scootaloo forgot her weapon at home, silly filly.
While it's all style and stuff, you can just use three asterisks between transitions. Or better yet just use the [hr] to make a scene break. Too many of those asterisks makes things look really bad on small screens: Tablets. Phones. The site in general when it squishes stuff down together as you zoom in.
So just three and be sure to double space between scene breaks. Far as Tiara goes perhaps we'll see more down the road on how she's grown, and just see how these six manage throughout the exam I suppose. Best of luck.
Also, might want to fix up the description a bit. Enter needs to be capitalized, you're missing a period at the end of that abbreviation "E.S.D.E." and place a "is" before "the".
Otherwise looks decent enough to me.
6363665 thank you for telling me about the asterisks.
the second chapter is undergoing changes and is being rewritten.
Good cliffhanger can't wait till the sequel
6383024 thank you I am currently writing it. it should be done before the end of the month.
You know, I could see Twilight putting the CMCs on team with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
6396346 I can see it too,even though i paired them up because i wanted a reason to write DT and SS.