Yeaaah. Gotta try those 'remedies' out, dontcha Zecora?

Excellent work as always!

Nice!

Great job. Funny and sexy.

This was... Good

i called the witch doctor and this is what she said

Ooh, eeh, ooh, ah, ah, ting, tang, walla, walla, bing, bang
Ooh, eeh, ooh, ah, ah, ting, tang, walla, walla, bing, bang

You made it too easy.

"else they may be liable to explode" WHAT ?!?

7765886 that's exactly what I was thinking the whole time I read it/worked on it

And Twilight, so absorbed in her books, didn't notice the swell of Zecora's belly over the next... ohh... 9 months.

7765910 Gives a whole new meaning to the phrase, "Use 'em or lose 'em," eh?

7766419 Actually, it wasn't that difficult. I'd think out what I wanted her message to be, and thus wrote it as well as I could, and got more than a little help from my proofreader for the more oddly-worded parts.

Hardest thing for this story was just writing it to be long enough that it wasn't just up and over too quickly.

As soon as I read the title,this came immediately into mind.

7766426 something something quick finisher

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I got this version in my head.

7766114 it is indeed a song that is forever linked to it's words.

I'm not the biggest fan of this type of stuff but the fact that you managed to write Zecora rhyming while every thing else was happening has earned an favorite from me

7766419 That entirely depends on if you make her rhyme in the first place. But developing a good backstory for her? Man, it took me forever to come up with one that sounded reasonable.

AMAZING!

7769842 Thank you for pointing that out; fixed.

I wouldn't mind seeing this expanded into a FULL story. have their relationship expand and see where it goes

Me likes, me likes...
*adds to shelf*

I had hoped the epilogue would tell a bit about if their relationship would last beyond Spike's mating cycle. Though I have to say, the end was pretty hilarious too

If Twilight only knew that Spike's 'curiosity' has been 'taken care of'. I wonder how Zecora is going to explain to Twilight the reason for Zecora's schedule adjustment...especially nine months later?

I know this story is done but i think you got the making for a great seris. and nice work with Zecora's ryming. I know not alot of people like it but its a nice show case for righter skills.

Please make a story of this follow-up.

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i agree i want to see a pregnant zecora and a shocked twilight

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