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This story is a sequel to One Last Bottle
Rarity and her husband, Vibrant Cloth, have a discussion over breakfast in which they'll decide their future. They knew this moment was coming sooner or later.
*Rated Teen due to implied sexual activities*
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I love it. That's the stallion who deserve to be recognize like a true husband. I think it will be great if Rarity and Spike help him to found another mare for he be with. And one good one Hehehehe
That's the perfect way to have a good divorce without fight.
Argh!
this awesome sequel's awesome tone change gave me awesome whiplash! Awesomely!7701006 or stallion since he said spike was handsome and had a nice pare
7701112 Hehehe, this too, he was curious about some parts of dragons, but I think is just messing with her, or not. Hehehe
Vibrant: Spike, there is something I've always wanted to know about you.
Rarity: *No...*
Spike: What do you want to know?
Rarity: *No no no...*
Vibrant: Is it true that you have two-
Rarity: Oh dear, look at the time.
so, Sparity isn't your OTP? ^^
"Clap, Clap, Clap"
I didn't take Rarity as a horrible piece of shit. Oh well, to each their own.
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7701184 He gay!
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Genius!
7703419 Sparity is one of my four OTP! And it sits on the top!
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7703652 I don't quite understand your comment? Care to elaborate?
7703873 She cheated. What's to explain?
7703873 Maybe if was that, maybe it was more interesting if he betrayed her with a stallion than his assistant.
7703892 His assistant is a stallion XD.
7703882 Ah! I get you now.
7703912 Damn, I need to read three times, and I was thinking it was a mare. Hehehe
Huh. That was unexpected.
This was interesting to say the least. I like that this was a happy ending and all and everyone is going to get what they want. What I am dying to see tho is the Spike and Rarity relationship from the start, to the passionate time of them sneaking around, the thrill the spark all of it that I feel is the real story here. I mean they were together for a few years before Spike came into the picture so what made her and Spike reconnect and what lead to this kind of relationship.
I think another interesting thing would a version of this end where it didn't go so perfectly. Rarity got off with a 5 YEAR affair with a supporting and secretly closeted husband. But what if it didn't go so smoothly, what if she had to deal with seeing the hurt, the betrayal, and all the real pain her affair caused? But even then I don't think I want to ruin this happy ending with a realistic one. I think for the drama and feelings I think a wild intense and steamy affair between the two of them would be far more interesting to see lol.