• Published 23rd Sep 2016
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A Moment On the Lips - Shamrock95



An apparent casual fling with a nice mare doesn't go quite the way Caramel expected it to.

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...Forever on the hips

"Welcome to Ponyville..." Midnight Star pursed her lips as she read the sign outside the little town, a slight breeze ruffling her jet-black coat and blowing a few strands of her ice-white mane out of place.

"Looks like a pleasant enough place," she mumbled to herself. She squinted against the setting sun as she cast her eyes around the town, looking at the cosy houses nestled among the cobblestone streets. Small-town Equestria, it would seem—one of many towns of its type she'd come across in her travels. Appleoosa, Hollow Shades... small, friendly communities. Not as many opportunities for her particular brand of fun as in the big cities, but they were serviceable all the same.

A smile came across Midnight's lips as she trotted into town. Tonight, she certainly felt like having some fun... all she needed was to find the right pony.


The evening air grew colder as Midnight trotted through the narrow streets, politely greeting and chatting to the townsponies as she made her way through town, ostensibly looking for an inn to stay the night. Granted, she was looking for somewhere to stay the night, but that wasn't her top priority. No, her priority was finding the perfect pony to have some fun with.

To her slight irritation, she hadn't found anypony suitable just yet. She'd know she found the right one when... well, she just knew. She'd see a pony, and something about them would just speak to her. Tell her that yes, this was the one she'd use for the night.

Unfortunately, she hadn't found anypony in this town who'd given her that feeling. She grunted with frustration, scuffing the ground with a hoof. This was why she preferred the cities. There, you had thousands of ponies to choose from. In small towns like this, there were only a few hundred, maybe a thousand at most. If you didn't find one there, then you were plum out of...

Then she saw him. A tan earth pony stallion with a chocolate-brown mane and tail, blue eyes, and a cutie mark of three blue horseshoes. Midnight's eyes widened, before a smile crossed her face. Oh yes... yes, he would do perfectly.

The stallion was walking along, whistling tunelessly, when Midnight cleared her throat behind him. He jumped slightly, before turning to face her with a slightly nervous expression.

"Oh, sorry!" Midnight said, giggling. "I didn't mean to startle you. I'm looking for the Cosy Pines Hotel. Do you know where that is?"

Satisfied that the mare before him meant him no harm, the stallion gave her a smile in return. "Oh, um, sure. It's a little ways out of town, about ten minutes from here. I can show you the way if you like. I mean, it'll be easier than explaining where it is."

Perfect. "Yeah, that'd be great," Midnight smiled. "I'm Midnight Star, by the way."

"Caramel," the stallion offered. With that, the two set off through town. As they walked, they made the sort of idle small talk that newly acquainted strangers are wont to make.

"So, what brings you around here, Midnight?" Caramel asked.

"Just travelling," Midnight said casually, flicking her mane to one side with a toss of her head. "I enjoy wandering Equestria, seeing what the towns and villages have to offer. I've been almost from coast to coast, you know."

"Really?" Caramel whistled. "Man, I'd love to travel, but I never find the time or money. Plus it's hard to get time off work."

"What's work?" Midnight asked.

"Farrier," Caramel explained, turning his head and nodding at his cutie mark. "It's hard work, but there's plenty of work to be had. Just about everypony in Ponyville has come to me for new shoes at some point."

As they continued to walk and talk, Midnight scanned her surroundings, looking for a good spot where she could have some fun with this stallion. It might be a better idea for her to wait until they were out of town. In fact, it looked like they were coming up to the outskirts now. They were leaving the houses and cobbled streets behind, and ahead of them were rolling fields accompanied by a small grove of trees...

The trees! Perfect.

"Almost there now," Caramel smiled. "It's just up the road a bit. A little out of the way, but it's a nice place to stay."

"Mmhmm." Midnight remained silent until they came to the trees, then stopped.

"You know, Caramel," she said, injecting a sultry note into her voice, "there's... something else I need. Something more than just a place to sleep."

"Oh?" Caramel replied. "What's that?" He noted the half-lidded expression Midnight was giving him.

Midnight smiled and sighed. "I'm lonely, Caramel. It gets pretty lonesome being out on the road on your own. Sometimes, you just need to feel... something good." She stepped up close to him, close enough that they were almost muzzle to muzzle.

Caramel flushed deeply as he realised Midnight was flirting with him. "Well, Midnight, um... I'm flattered, I really am, but... didn't we just meet?"

"Oh, what does that matter?" Midnight giggled, pulling him in closer. Caramel yelped slightly in surprise, but didn't resist. "We're both grown ponies. Besides, it's not like I'm looking for a long-distance relationship. Besides, you seem like the sort of stallion I can trust." She winked. "Plus, you're a heck of a cutie."

Caramel's blush turned a deep crimson, and he chuckled. "Well, when you put it that way..."

"Shh," Midnight whispered, before leaning in and giving him a peck on the lips. "Enough talking. Come on, let's head to those trees... somewhere nice and discreet."

Caramel was more than happy to let her lead him to the grove, scarcely able to believe his luck. Hadn't he just been thinking about how long it had been since he'd been in an intimate relationship? Granted, this wasn't a real relationship, but a quick fling was just as good.

Hidden safely among the trees, Midnight wrapped her hooves around Caramel's neck, gazing him in the eyes. She smiled and winked.

"You know, there's a saying you should have listened to when you kissed me back there, Caramel," she said softly. "A moment on the lips..."

She broke away from him, walking over to his rear and hungrily eyeing his flanks.

"...forever on the hips."

Without any further aplomb, she grabbed hold of both of Caramel's flanks and began to knead them. As she did so, her horn lit up with a white glow, transferring a flow of magical energy from her horn to her hooves.

"Whoa!" Caramel grinned, laughing. "Forward, aren't..."

Then he cut himself off, as he felt a strange sensation in his flanks. Were... were they growing heavier?

Caramel turned his head. To his utter shock, both of his flanks had ballooned in size. They were almost twice as big as they normally would have been. Caramel began to feel decidedly bottom-heavy as Midnight kneaded his rump, swelling his ass cheeks up to match his flanks.

"What the buck?" Caramel gasped, his eyes wide with shock and horror. "Wh-what are you doing? Stop it!"

"Oh, I don't think so," Midnight giggled. "The fun's just getting started!"

She crouched down low and pressed her hooves into Caramel's toned, muscular stomach, kneading almost painfully deep. Caramel moaned as he felt his stomach begin to bulge, his abs giving way to a flabby pot belly.

Midnight licked her lips, letting out a squee of glee as she watched her prize grow rounder, softer and fatter. Gods, this never got old. To take somepony so thin and make them so big...

Caramel moaned again. "Why... why are you... doing this...?" he mumbled.

"Because," Midnight said sweetly, "I like my ponies big. Very big." She chuckled. "You think you're big now?"

She trotted over and smooshed Caramel's cheeks, causing them to swell up with fat as well. "You should see the stallion I have at home. Hazelnut, he's called. I've got him big enough to fill a room on his own!" She giggled. "But then, I had months to work on him. You, not so much. But, I think I can work with what I have..."

She continued to rub all over Caramel's body, every touch of her hooves causing new deposits of fat to bulge out. Caramel groaned. He wanted to resist, to fight back, but he just... couldn't. It felt like his senses were trapped in molasses, preventing him from coordinating any sort of resistance.

Finally, Midnight stepped back and admired her handiwork. Thanks to her careful sculpting, where once there had been a trim, fit stallion, there was now a massive butterball in need of a serious crash diet. Caramel's gut hung low enough to scrape the forest floor, swaying slightly from its own momentum. His rump had swollen to the approximate size and shape of two overinflated beach balls, the weight of his butt cheeks forming a crease running along their bottom halves, with a pair of thick, meaty flanks to match. His face, as round and plump as that of a chipmunk, bore a look of wide-eyed shock and disbelief. His mouth opened and closed like a particularly dumb fish as he tried and failed to make sense of what had happened to him.

"Well, that was fun, Caramel," Midnight said cheerfully. "But I think it's time we called it a night."

One final burst of magic from her horn shot towards Caramel. Immediately, his eyes drooped and became heavy. With a slosh of his wobbling stomach, he fell to the ground, fast asleep.

Grinning widely, Midnight left him in the grove and continued on her way to the hotel. Caramel would wake up some time the next morning, no worse for wear, but in dire need of a diet and exercise regimen. By that time, Midnight would be long gone, on to some other place... and some other pony to have some fun with.

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Comments ( 37 )

7588951 Nothing like some good ol' forced weight gain, am I right?

That... was pretty dang good! You should do more stories with this character.:pinkiehappy:

Midnight Star is definitely my kind of evil

I'd love to get an expanded look of her exploits

hurhur c wut i did ther

7589023 Thanks! Maybe I will.

7589045 Go sit in the corner and think about what you just said.

7589062 Why don't you make me, mom

I think the idea was great, but I feel that you rushed it a little too much as I would have liked t o see Caramel having sex with her and go all slow with caramel noticing something strange happening to him but too distracted with the mare to really focus on what was happening ti his body. It would have been also great to see how his life was ruined by his bulking up.

Oh my, I do believe Caramel to be very much worse off. A farrier is fairly demanding job physically, and requires a fair bit of dexterity and strength. Even more so if one forges the shoes themselves.
Good bye any savings and a good bit of income, for quite a while yet.
As for Midnight...Karma has big plans for her I'd hope, and a massive scale to balance.
I do hope we get to see the grande-est of shows, with her on the center stage and maybe a few of her flings in the audience.

7589704 Yeah, I know it's a little fast-paced. Blame how tired I was after all the college work.

7589966 Oh, and there were a lot of flings, too. Including Braeburn in Appleoosa, incidentally.

7590274
That'd be a great show, even more so with Twilight getting wind of a transmorgrifier with that kind of spell.
She might even use Midnight as a self sufficient test subject, knowing how efficient the pretty purple princess is with such research.
All it'd take is a horn ring with the right charm...

7590302 Good luck catching her, though. The closest they came was when two royal guards came to her cabin to investigate the disappearance of one Hazelnut. The next day, Hazelnut had one new companion in the basement, and Midnight had one new garbage disposal in the woods.

7590318
I do believe a large enough count of victims and relatives and friends of an Alicorn and a few others would warant a bounty tied to her discription.
Unless she mindwipes them but the story doesn't really infer that.
Even so, the missing guards would only attract more attention, and possibly even more...unsavory members of the guard and Equestrian military as families and friends demand answers.
No matter how good one is at hiding and running, luck inevitably runs out.
Edit: even then, someone in town would have noticed her and Caramel leaving, and a few others would note how she was the last one with him.
I'm also marginally disgusted she'd leave someone in the middle of a forest as a disposal with the risks it'd entail, both for their health from exposure and animals, I doubt any predator worth it's salt would pass on a meal like that.

7590325 If it's any consolation, it was only a small grove of trees. It wasn't exactly the Everfree Forest. It's the sort of place where you could camp out for the night without fear.

She covered her tracks with the guards, too. The next day, their letters of resignation were received.

7590335
The guard or Caramel? Even then left immobile out in the open leaves all kinds of issues, from cold to pneumonia and everything imbetween and even a few issues purely from that much weight on rotting grass and wet earth for extended periods of time.

7590339 The guards she captured. As for health issues, well... I'mma just use the same explanation for why Ponyville can shrug off monster attacks like it's nothing:

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7590350 arguably worse because thats just laziness and inhumane(or at least more so then she already is) at that point.
Either way, I do hope she gets a big ole helping of what goes around comes around, if only because she'd be beyond massive with an ass to match from the returns and bankrupt from reparations, and it'd be a brilliant read.

7590354 How massive are we talking here? Not really into mountain-sized blobs myself.

7590371 I'd leave the upper limit to your decision if you decide to write it, but I don't think many of her prior subjects would be willing to be merciful in their additions to her figure with how willingly she put them under such conditions, and considering the guards, their families would be more then furious, especially if they had foals. She also kidnapped government employees and soldiers at that, so depending on who and what the laws are in this version of Equestria, well, I don't see a diet helping and excercise even being possible.

7590378 Hmm... well, maybe we'll get lucky. Maybe one day she'll pick the wrong victim.

7590378 Well, not all of her victims were innocent. She once turned a pair of would-be muggers into big ol' tubs of lard, for example.

7590811 I'd still call them victims and by her spell's nature she would have had to go beyond anything really right as punishment on her own choice. And seeing as I doubt a mugger would even have the means to lose the weight without severe damage to whatever livelyhood they had if not outright leaving them homeless. Add to that the low chance that they weren't promptly targeted by someone with worse intentions when they couldn't fight back.
More so, she's earned more then a mugging with kidnapping and what I'll assume is abuse of magic by Equestrian law, so sympathy is in short supply for her if at all in that instance.

7590971 Dang. I set out to create a villain, and I made a monster. :rainbowderp:

7590976 More so you created a villian that someone like me can pinpoint and lockdown for every choice.
I tend to think about all the consequences an action might bring, no matter how simple and mundane the outcome seems compared to some truly monstrous acts, as sometimes it's a little thing that ruines a life.

You should turn this to a daily thing! Where she would come back and try it on other background ponies and even some well known characters!

I don't know why, but I wanna see how she'll get Diamon Tiara if she did. I only think that she would cause of how much of a spoiled brat she is.

If I could take caramel's place I'd do it in a heartbeat.

7625019 I'd rather take Midnight's place, honestly.

Caramel with a big bouncing booty. Yum Yum! Interesting that the pony with the biggest plot in Ponyville under Hotshot's rule was Red Delicious, who's a palette swap of Caramel, and then this happens.

7627048 Indeed. I'm still thinking of new "playthings" for Midnight... Perhaps Double Diamond could make the mistake of asking for directions at her cabin?

7627052 Sounds good! And since Double Diamond is a laid-back skier, he'll just let it all hang out. No pun intended. His fat ass could even keep him warm on the slopes

7627072 That is, if she ever lets him go. She might decide that Hazelnut and that guard could do with a third companion... :pinkiecrazy:

7625033 the thing is i like the idea of being fattened up and stuffed so that's why :3

7589062
Hey, if you're looking for ideas for another victim for her, I got a great one for Thunderlane.:heart:

7694148 I'll shoot you a message. :raritywink:

This is my kind of mare. And there's a sequel? Yes! :rainbowkiss:

7814407 Hehe, glad you like her!

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