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This story is a sequel to A Moment On the Lips
Thunderlane and Cloudchaser have an evening of romance and possible intimate pleasantry planned for the night. However, a certain mare is back in town, and she intends to change their plans in big ways.
Contains: fat ponies, extreme obesity/immobility, fat inflation.
Major props to H123G for giving me this idea!
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7699176 Maybe karma will come for her some day. In my experience, karma works slowly, but she works finely.
Oh, this is great great even perfect, I hope you will stretch the story as long as possible, maybe for days hopefully, maybe make Thunderlane get him to eat despite his weight and makes his so big that he can't get out of his house. I wander if he can sink in a cloud house. I would love it if Rumble could be trap ender her clutches/hooves. I hope hope she has more then one trick up her sleeve then just make fatting them up with her hooves. Could their be actual sex in it? Can't wait to see more of this story
7699195 I'm afraid not.
7699218 She'll be spending just the one night with him, I'm afraid.
7699237
Considering her mistakes in hiding herself, It's going to be very hard not to have a wanted poster across Equestria at this point.
And I do believe she set herself up for hell once Cloudchaser gets a hold of her.
7699237 too bad, how about having her taunting the still hungry and overweight thungerlane to try with holing out food just out of his reach?
7699298 Well, at least Midnight didn't leave her out in the woods like she did with Caramel. Her living room is a much safer place, right?
7699402 True, but think about the psychology of it.
Cloudchaser is going to murder her if she can move the next time they meet.
This is gonna be good~
7699463
God I like this character. I want there to be more stories about her, each one slowly leading to her demise. How big is she planning to make thunderlane I wonder? I would also love if we got a story about her and hazelnut, the stallion she mentioned In a moment on the lips. A story about her making him big enough to fill a room as she described it
7700387 I actually wrote a story about her and Hazelnut ages ago, but never got around to posting it here. Glad you like her, in any case.
It was a great read, and I hope you will continue with this character, but I would like it if there could be more variations to how she goes about fattening up stallions, then just touching them.
7701035 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
She deserves everything coming for her, and I'm waiting for her victims to get a hold of her.
Wonder how much a Pony can weigh before they crush themselves.
7701251 5,000 pounds?
7701279 Wonder what the total weight she added to everyone is, and if it's over that.
Edit: also, she reaaaally should've wiped Cloudchaser and Rumbles memory, since now they have a reference for her looks.
And with two guards going missing in proximity to her residence, I don't think she'll be finding a small platoon of ponies as easy to take advantage of.
Interesting fact, the scene with Thunderlane and the glass of water was actually an idea I
stolegot from this.7701510 Ahh, clever.
Damn man. Like, we knew Midnight was heartless, but man, she could give Steve Austin a run for his money!
Overall a great read, although, to be honest, there were times when the amount of sympathy I was feeling towards Thunder and Cloudchaser got in the way of the hotness. Damn conscience!
7700419 still as much as I like her, a few of her lines are a bit cheesy and a bit cringe worthy. For example how she wants to get to know thunderlane on a more intimate level on the first date hahaha
7701959 Pfft, lightweight. A true fetishist learns to suppress his conscience entirely.
7703025 I'm more worried about what'll happen to Rumble, what with his guardian unable to move, work or care for him.
Midnight might've just landed a foal in a foster home.
7704239 I'm sure he has friends who'll be willing to help out until the mess is sorted out.
7704269 That'll take a few years at Thunderlanes size, or a couple hundred thousand bits for lipo.
7704277 Don't worry, his health insurance has "curses and hexes" coverage.
7704305 So he'll be near bankrupt and without a job from insurance rates and bills.
7704316 What if Equestria has universal healthcare?
7705961 As far as I'm aware it wouldn't cover the procedure in full, ruining his whatever equivelant to a credit system Equestria has.
And even then, no business in any system would keep him in his current condition or even someone half his size, so he's effectively fired from the weather team and unhireable for, seeing as he can't move enough to even attempt to work off the weight, almost a decade without a small fortune for the lipo procedures or some one magically intervening.
I am going to add I'm not one of the dislikes, since I'm kind of the only one really digging into this on this front, really don't want it to come off the wrong way.
Mmm this is delicious XD. Nice job on the sequel!
7783468 Thanks!
Wow, more story, more inflation! This one was better than the last!
I hope there's more to come.
7814431 Oh, there will be.~
7814437 Sweet! I hope soon!
7700419
Have you posted that story here yet? Just wondering.