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Warfire Writing Studios


Welcome to Warfire Writing Studios, a collab of stories written by PhoenixWarlord and PrinceNightfire93. If you're interested in a commission, shoot us a message and we'll give you details. Thanks! /)

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I'M CANCER (aka first)

Wow can't wait for the next part.

Didn't twilight say no baby stuff? Death is still going to breed her?

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Pretty sure she meant no baby play, like dressing her up in diapers and the such.

Ok.
So Twilight is willingly to be Death's slave to ensure her 5 FRIENDS!!! immortality.
But here comes my ethernal Question.
WHAT ABOUT SPIKE!?!?!?
Does THIS means that Spike isnt Twilight's friend? Is he just her #1 assistant? Just a helper? Basically a slave?

Comment posted by ShadowKing1992 deleted Nov 9th, 2016
Comment posted by ShadowKing1992 deleted Nov 9th, 2016

WHAT ABOUT SPIKE!?!?!?

7708339
Perhaps they're going by the headcanon that dragons are already immortal in MLP.

7708362

Dragons generally are immortal in fiction.

I hope Twilight figures a way around the contract and maybe even kill death so she can be freed from it and get the other alicorn princess free of theirs while making her friends immortal also.

7709036 That's basically what we thought about. Dragons are immortal.

7708362
NOBODY CARES ABOUT SPIKE

Will there be more?

7728170 Yes, there will be. There will be quite a few more chapters coming to this story, so stay tuned for them. :twilightsmile:

7708339 He's a dragon. Dragons are immortal naturally. Why would she need to mention him, when he already has what she's trying to give?

I wonder, what would happen if a hidden clause was put into the contract and Death himself broke it, what would happen to him and the pony he made the contract with but the pony added in that hidden clause?

Like I thought. Twilight told none of her friends of this. What if one or even ALL of them don't want to live longer than is natural

Twilight's old bedroom and Dress from the Gala?
Oh man, that stung a heartstring.
I got so emotional in that part.

7756684 Awww, that's something to hear. We through it in as an easter egg and we're glad we did. :twilightsmile:

7708339 Actually we had in mind that Spike was basically immortal like the Alicorns. That's been my thought anyway. Thanks for bringing Spike up to us.

Giving Twilight a safeword like that kind of defeats the purpose of slavery as compensation.

when is the next part coming out?

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It should come out in the near future. We've had a bit of writer's block recently and hope to continue this series soon. Glad you like it so far.

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It is not slavery so much as indentured servitude, since an exchange is being made with Twilight serving Death for ten years in exchange for the immortality of her friends. Though safewords are more associated with domination/submission sexual roleplays.

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That wasn't my main point. I mean it's not that much of a sacrifice if Twilight doesn't have to surrender control over her own body.

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