This was made for two purposes:
For a darkfic requested by the Brony Horror group administrator.
My personal fate for Principal Cinch. Three words: I. Hate. Her. Apparently, she gets off with a reprimanded from her own staff and students. *singsong* Not in this story she doesn't.
This is such a bizarre mix of comedy switching into horror. Very dramatic genre change. You did the characterizion really well, too.
Great horror story! Just some small punctuation errors, like
That sould be "!?" instead, since this is a question.
7530019 Abbott says "Who's on first!!" because he's trying to tell Costello the first baseman's name is Who (for the umpteenth time).
7530123 Ohhhh XD oops sorry
7530285 The routine is an oldie but goodie.
This story was great!