Ah just might spoil Sweetie an' give her all of my special white sauce as she can handle, you have my word on that.” Big Mac said while trying to look innocent

That line seems a bit too obvious, especially since Rarity is familiar with sex and made an innuendo or two of her own. Maybe instead, keep to the idea and have him say something along the lines of letting her have all the custard she can stand.

I also can't help but suspect that Rarity may know more about her sister's activities than she is letting on.

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I will take that into consideration. I actually think my editor said something similar, but I apparently missed changing it.

Also, yes. Rarity was well aware that something was going on beneath the counter, but she was too much of a lady to point it out. Rarity does not know it Sweetie Belle though. And this will have a consequent later in the series.

"Come inside"?

Please Rarity, you're not Rainbow Dash and you never will be.

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There you go, I have decided to rewrite that particular line. My editor had actually pointed it out as I said, but I’d missed to change it in the final draft when I look through it. Thank you for highlighting the mistake for me Hopeful_Ink_Hoof!

Have a nice one!

Aha, you bamboozled me. Thumbs up!

While I'm willing to bet 99 % that this isn't equine glory holes (aka: female gloryholes), that would indeed be a massive surprise haha xP
Anyhow, can kinda guesstimate the theme and direction this fic takes. And pretty sure it will perform like expected for those into it =3

Haha, cheerilee, hilarious. Looking forward to more.

Awwww man, still no update? We miss ya!

This dead? :(

So sad to see this went away.

This story needs another chapter ;)

This really dose need more

This was super fun and interesting to read. It took me a few days since I had been busy whole I was reading but still is very amazing to read and hopefully you make more chapters for it