Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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I'm glad that there was no chastisement of Luna for not trusting that Shining and Cadance were definitely okay, because Shining and Cadance were hiding their own important potentially harmful secrets from the other princesses (specifically that there were agents of Chrysalis in Equestria). They don't really have much of a moral high ground, and I was hoping that Trixie, in confessing, would implore Cadance to clear the air with Luna.
7953766 The game of kings has no room for moral high ground, however they are ponies, and are likely to sort things out eventually. But then Twilight just has to go and interrupt everything with her own little craziness.
Well, this has certainly expanded on the original. Pity though, I miss how C&L found out about everything originally. It was fun.
A question for Careful: how does it feel to have not recognized that Trixie was a spy, while at the same time recognizing that she would be a great spy, and that she should be trained as one?
This story has really taken a life of its own now. How much of the original Shining's is left of him anyway?
Hahaha the bomb explodes! Surprisingly enough, not a lot of collateral damage, Celestia really was distracted, huh?
Meanwhile the superbly humbled Trixie has her world shattered. Now everybody else but her has wings!
So MMC just happened, interesting. Shining will be there with a "oh it's not all that bad Twily" remark, huh?
To Luna: did she pass the test?
Keep going! ;)
7953812 we believe about 30 percent externally at this was time. The interior is probably much higher.
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I actually went back and had to look up whether they were sending Trixie into Equestria to spy on any Equestrians before accusing them of doing the exact same thing, and it turned out they were sending her to go look out for Chrysalis agents, although there was a line about "a spy that can rub elbows with royalty."
But, both in country-level spygames and personal concern, both of their actions are understandable... the Crystal Empire was unsure how much information is safe (and comfortable) to share and felt like they were handling it fine themselves, and the Equestrians were worried they didn't have the whole picture (which they didn't) and wanted to know more.
Question for her Eminence of Emotion, Lady of Love, Angel of Amour, Denzeim of Deception, Imperial of Idolisation, Mistress of Manipulation Queen Chrysalis: "How will your plans now shift as that pathetic gnat Twilight Sparkle has cheated fate to advance above her station?"
well it is about time for this to come out in the open but to have twilight ascend at the same time wow amassing.
So if shining counts as a stallion alicorn, that makes 5 alicorns, if flurry comes into the mix as well, that's 6.... THERE IS NO STOPPING THEM!
Nice chapter, everything here was very nicely done.
I wonder if the other horseshoe will ever drop about Trixie?
7953935 You mean will it come out that she is a half-changeling alicorn princess with red fur and a black mane/tail?
7953935 He looks like an alicorn stallion, he is a changeling at his core now.
For a moment there, I thought Trixie was ascending.
It is a bad romance novel plot. As stated many times before, Chrysalis didn't think much about that plan.
7953911 Your choices of words always amazed me. Thank you, I learn a lot.
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No problem
All you need to do is read every day for 15/16 years
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7953960 Don't dare do that to poor Trixie, she'll end up in a coma. Certainly don't invoke the Red & Black Wrath on anypony, that'll cause a 'jumping the shark' jinx on your story.
7955826 All fixed!
And I won't do that, so long as she remains a vibrant and multi-dimensional character, and doesn't devolve back into a narrow villain.