Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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o now this chapter has a rather large revel in it. now Rarity knows and so does guard Gleaming Shine I know it is part of guard training to keep ones snout shut but Rarity may be a bit of a problem she tends to have a rather large snout (yes Rarity I am talking about you) she tends to spread things faster than a newspaper.
and no I do not apologies for the truth Rarity.
I liked the part where Rarity deal with Shining armor, I thought it gives her a lot more character to her then what I expected, great job of having her take charge of the situation.
7495620 She ends up running how many stores? I think Rarity of all ponies knows how to take charge of a situation.
This is the best kind of Rarity, in my opinion.
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The show, I think, frequently downplays her. She isn't meant to be as Mary Sue as Twilight is, but she has the smarts and the confidence to build a business from the ground up, from just herself working there, to having two extra retail outlets as well as her main shop.
No, Rarity Belle is not simpering and confused easily, nopony going into business for themselves could be those things, and particularly not somepony who succeeds at it as well as she does.
An interesting call to have her out there, but a clever one none the less to hide the issues.
And two more ponies are inducted into Project Fire Heart!
So it's not going to be a sock.... Well, good time for Shining to gain some vanity!
Keep going! ;)
More OC to remember, it seem. Let ship her with Careful again...Time to make a harem, little one.
7497577 No, no no no. Sorry, this is the wrong story for that. My stance on traditional 'mare harem' fics is well documented (and apparently disliked).
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Low number than Harem...Love triangle, I guess...
7498308 That could be a question to ask him? Or her? Or any of them!
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But love triangle will not happen if you have enough male Changeling for every new mare.
7498603 Are you challenging me? Do you know the powers with which you meddle?
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I think if you do it. what more challenging for you is how to make people remember all OCs of your. It hard to remember every none-canon characters sometime... =u=
Was a little anxious going into a redux but this is turning out so good almost wished I hadn't bothered on the first version, not to say the humour wasn't worth it.
Glemming Shine? Is this your trick to incorporate Glemming Shield in a story where Shining is becoming a shape-shifter? I can see the chaos coming up!
7937435 Not really, I actually quite dislike the use of R63 names, even in R63 fiction. It was just a name.
I feel like Shining's transformation is going to be painful. I know this is kinda a random
Comment, but since Shining doesn't have any wings, it seems most likely that the wings will rip from his flesh. (OUCH!)
I just have to say that this is one of the best portrayals of Rarity I have read in quite a while. Kudos on 'ya!
I can vividly imagine this scene in my mind and it's giving me the giggled xD