Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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Now that's how you brainwash! Slowly, methodically, so much that it's not noticed until they feel its truthfulness integrally and without doubt! Careful has carefully found his cares adjusted...
Keep going! ;)
little precession inside - little procession inside
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It's good to finally be able to turn my attention back to typo hunting at your stories as well as Mr. Silver's. I've been enjoying this re-telling so far and will continue reading, even if I can't always comment or ferret out typos.
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I could not help but imagine the following:
[cut to a long shot of the crystal palace exterior. All is quiet for three beats then a number of intricate stained glass windows are vaporized by a wave of pink magic that blasts through the now empty frames.]
Cadance: She what??!
i though tthis the first time i read this but never mentioned it or if i did i dont remember but this word doesnt fit here
i think you meant 'waylaid' or something like that, the word used here means 'to give a speech to' the term 'shanghaied' or a ponified version of it might work for comedic effect too though that would imply he was forced into it i suppose, which he sorta was but by circumstances not by the pony.
"Love Shank"!?
. . .
🎶Love Shank baby, Love Shank.
Love Shank baby, Love Shank.
Love Shank baby, Love Shank.
Love Shank baby, Love Shank.🎶
. . . I have no regrets
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🎶 The love shank is a little old shiv so—we can stab to-geth-er! 🎵
Random typo spotted in the second paragraph from the top:
Given that the opening scene plays in the hive and Careful is already way up north in the Crystal Empire by then, this should prooobably be Sneaky instead.
(And yeah, I’m just about six years late, but I’ve only stumbled across this story right now and that’s the excuse I’m planning to stick with. )
11184916 Fixed! Thank you. It is always a good time to fix typos.