Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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Cute ending to this point, and dirty love tricks are great tricks.
So "bright bolt", on a scale of 1 to ten, how embarrassed do you feel?
A question for Careful: What do you enjoy most about your job?
well, I hope Shining will at least be a hermaphrodite of some sort, all doe I would wander how well he would take laying clusters of eggs.
There is no normal male on earth, equestria, or any planet in fiction that would be as nonchalant about the prospect of their junk falling off as shining armor is. I hope the author can address this.
7514488 You don't think he is a little numb to this whole thing at the moment? Weeping himself to sleep each night in his wife's embrace.
The changeling smiled at the alicorn. "I win!" He fell over, completely drunk on the love that had been forced into him.
bravo all's fare in love and hunting changeling's.
ok now they have a changeling now what are they going to do with her???
7514501 No. I've suffered trauma and have had to deal with the possibility of losing body parts, it takes a bit of a forefront with your thoughts. You tend to panic. I just hope you bring it up in a conversation later on.
7514755 Not really the place to discuss such, but this is not a topic I lack experience in myself.
7514773 I mean, you bring the topic up in the story. Have i dunno, have cadence and shining talk about it. Im sure you're creative enough to write a piece about shining freaking out he's gonna lose his junk and then have cadence reassure him she loves him regardless of what sex he ends up having.
7514810 Oh, there are plans for this, don't worry. I was just pointing out, right at this exact moment, he is sort of running on nervous energy, relying on his wife being the most awesome alicorn to keep him on the straight and narrow. In his mind, he is lumping all the 'future problems' on her—she is planning, making lists, working out what might happen—while he tries to cling to what he can and keep from being found out. Part of this is the changeling influence in him 'infiltrate, hide', part is that his little sister tended to do all the panicking the stallion ever needed, for him.
Royal Guard met them - A Royal Guard met them
slowly walk off - walk off slowly
A hoof pokes - A hoof poked
both the mares - both
themaresGood, Sir, not - Good, Sir. Not
be troubles by - be troubled by
so well it took her - so well it had taken her
had promised that they - had been promised that they
few other guard - few other guards
Careful waves his drink - Careful waved his drink
grabbed the bottle spinning it - grabbed the bottle, spinning it
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Almost makes me wish I were a changeling to get drunk off of all the love floating around.
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Hope this isn't too nit-picky, but Lt. Commander is a naval rank, the equivalent of an army Major. I have a relative who's a Lt. Commander in the Navy.
Of course, there's so much shipping that goes on in these stories, perhaps the naval designations are justified.
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I do somewhat feel that this was addressed by
7515104 Thanks, I can't believe I made so many in this one.
7515325 Yeah, on the outside he is leaning on the hope that maybe they can fix it, or that maybe it will all be worked out in 'a half hour episode'. There is likely to be a blow-up, if things do go really bad.
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Much like a guitar, Bright's embarrassment goes up to 11.
Nice trap! Though that trick probably won't work like that again.
One of the tells of a good spy is that they're overly normal. An excellent spy keeps it natural.;)
To Careful: do you feel yourself getting fatter being chocked full of love energy all the time?
Keep going! ;)
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some Royal Guard - Some Royal Guard
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Don't feel bad, you're creating things and that's a messy process.
7515795 Thanks! I can still curse at myself, though.
Oh my GOD
8962331 Poor changebug just won the talent show!
you just had a bit of a continuity error here, they had already realized shining was turning into a queen in a previous chapter...the same way as here btw when they first started documenting things.
9055704 Eeek! Thanks. It was meant to be "we think" for the first time, but this one was meant to be the clincher. I hope you're enjoying it otherwise!