Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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I really enjoy this characterization of Cadance, if only because it really blends her ability to lead and command with her status as Alicorn of Love in a way that feels natural and congruent. I don't really feel like the show-Cadance really has much chance to demonstrate her loveyness.
catching what Careful said - catching what Careful had said
the drone looks at her with such devotion when he says 'my queen' - the drone looked at her with such devotion when he said 'my queen'
*****
And now it really begins!
Good, chapter but I feel that Shining's reaction to his new subject statement that he was posted to monitor his transformation a little too we, plus sense he is learning it before he start to see the actual effect of that goop ruins a little of the fun of the confusion of what is happening to him and the the fun hiding it from Cadence.
7459164 You will note that both he and Cadance seem to think that a wild story. He is hiding this from her still, just there is a little more going on with it.
Operation integration is a go! Phase one in progress!
We wonder how long it will be before Careful's continuous labeling of "his Queen" tips her off...
Seems the transformation is already off to a good start!
Keep going! ;)
You might want to change the "she" to a "he" because he is currently a unicorn stallion.
7459885 Thanks, those damn pronoun switches can be deadly!
Gorgeous....... I am going to like this.
7460029 Glad you are liking it!
Has a rainbow dash laugh moment
You really should edit this story to add contractions to the dialogue. Normal people don’t usually speak full words when contractions are available.
9318165 I know. I have vastly improved in that sense with my newer stuff. I'd really rather not spend the bulk of my time editing my older works, however, as I'd like to keep making things.