Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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Cadance , Shining and Careful have a plan and this sounds like a good one.
I wonder how queen Chrysalis will react as her hive is taken away from her.
I'm rather enjoying this. I'm uncertain about the new group of Changelings. Showing them replacing enthralling ponies... might be interesting to follow, depending on how it's done. Otherwise it might be depressing.
7467728 Heh, there was a slight tie-in there. In the mobile game, a changeling is disguised as Fleur and messes up the disguise in just that way. They will not be replacing ponies, just squeezing themselves in. The mare with the eye-whammy in particular is good at this. Also, notice how much/little she used her power? There is significance in this, a changeling queen she is not.
silver maned and white coated - silver-maned and white-coated
Crystal Enwire - Crystal Empire (or was this intentional?)
spell any time I want - spell anytime I want
mind numbing drivel - mind-numbing drivel
feed of love was tapered - feed of love was tapering
settled in to bed - settled into bed
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I'm not sure how exactly they are determining that the letters are being intercepted and read/copied.
But the most important thing is that we get to see more happy and well-fed changelings blissing out around Cadance and Shining Armor.
7467976 Thanks! Enwire was intentional, these are not the best infiltrators, but they are the best team. As for how they found out about the interception, that will come to light.
Wondering if duplication spells work completely and indiscriminately, including things like trace dragon fire markers...
That Cotton won't work forever, Shining! What's your next bright idea?
Keep going! ;)
I don't understand how people can screw this name up. But, then again, I am part French so I'm a bit biased.It's Fleur De LisOk, so, I just googled it to verify. It is Fleur Dis Lee in terms of her name. Why? That doesn't make any sense to be entirely honest. There's a big difference between fleur-de-lis and Fleur Dis Lee.
I have to admit, I was so confused by the start of this chapter, I had to read it five times before I finally understood what was going on.
7468616 Thanks, will go over it and see if I can make it a bit clearer. She is being a sneaky changeling, but she shouldn't be so sneaky as to confuse readers. Bad Bright!
7468602 Yeah, I know, but that is how they called it and that is how I write it. I have seen others range from writing it as I have, to writing it properly.
He sure did...and she loved it!