Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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shining fed for the first time I am going to guess his change will happening much faster now.
Hm. Shining releasing the last of his unicorn magic was not the event I expected when they were confronting Celestia and Luna. If I don't remember incorrectly, they still don't know of the transformation, do they?
But I think I like the position of this new changeling, as a magical expert at the best possible time for them.
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In the original version, they didn't find out until the final chapter.
The dialogue about Shining using his shield as a vacuum chamber was confusing, if that was what he made, you should probably explain it more clearly.
Snatched her from right under their noses!
Don't worry Gilt, your improved life has begun!
To Careful: how has your first day impersonating Shining gone?
Keep going! :)
7590324 Added a little bit of exposition, hope it helps more.
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Yes, it is a lot better now.
Interestingly, cavitation bubbles in water release a burst of light when they collapse, called Sonoluminescence.
Question for Cadance: Can you describe in detail what it feels like to be fed upon?
7592639 Cadance and Shining both know that changelings can shift gender as smoothly as species.
This chapter was so cute!!
Hmmm... if Shining is becoming a Changeling Queen... does this mean he is going to become one of the immortals, doesn't he?
7938643 You mean Shining and Cadance get to be together forever? Oh no, I would never have planned that...
It should say “I’m not ready” here.
9330394 Fixed it. Thanks!
Upon some reflection, I realized that this is the only time I have read this technique of re directing loyalty to a new hive. I have read a lot, and I mean a LOT, of MLP fanfics, and have come across drones leaving Chryssi in several ways. Pure, honest love and acceptance, even from the Princess of Food, is a new one to me. Kudos on your originality!
10861654 Fixed, thanks!