Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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That author's note brought forth in me a wave of empathy for Chrysalis for which I was not prepared. Had I not read the preceding version of this, I would be far more... upset on her behalf.
It's great to see that Shining is really starting to get out of his funk and now is taking the initiative to to find out more about what Chrysalis is up to and try to subvert the rest of the Changelings to his own hive; this really helps show that Shining is made of stronger stuff then most and can now start standing on his own again thanks to his wife's support. You really did a good job in developing there development of your characters. This is certainly a massive improvement over the original story, and go more in depth about what going with the Crystal couple those around them. I find some the Changeling characters a bit boring at times but I think it is necessary to better understand the typical drone perspective and how they adjust to life in the Crystal Emprire.
One question that I would like to Ask to Celestia, being the near freaken goddess of the sun or it warden at least how could Chrysalis manage to over power her with the reserve of "love" from a single minor Alicorn prisoner over an unspecified period of time. I would assume that the Avatar of the Sun how can move the sun on time everyday has at least power to spear to to defend herself or even channel it to the enemy?
Good, taking advantage of available resources. They need the intel on their future hive mates.
To Luna: what do you make of the things happening in the Crystal Empire?
Keep going! ;)
7880624 I'm afraid I've been corrupted by Dan's 'Fluffle Puff x Chryssi' world and seem to give her empathy always no matter what she is doing. Still believe even in canon that she is redeemable, just needs a little unscrambling.
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I forgot to say that I am also very interested in Trixie's development. It will be interesting to see the training bring out her true capabilities, à la Private Benjamin.
Question for Princess Celestia: "Are you proud of both Princess Cadance and Prince Shining Armor for putting aside their previous bad experiences with Changelings and trying to make peace?
way to go Trixie