Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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8074352 Thanks, all fixed.
It's really fun to see all the enlightenment happening. We can just imagine the no-speaking-parts changelings watching on in fearful anticipation for when their new Queen's facade falls down into the terror they've come to expect.
To Shining: ready to ingest a thousand new immigrants?
Keep going! ;)
great chapter as usual.
Question to Applejack: Since we now know there are professional farmer changelings in Crystal Empire, will you consider hiring changelings on your 'loving' farm? Considering they might not want bits in return, just 'loving' environment?
It is a good chapter, but I am just curious if Jade will ever realize what she is doing is wrong?
Lying for a changeling is life and death not just to the changeling, but for their entire hive.
I can understand her anger, but it doesn't change the fact that she is punishing Slick for something he had little choice in.
Not to mention that Jade is written as a higher functioning bimbo that even after just separating from Slick that same day sleeps with someone else. Leading the readers to believe that she is not known for saying no, and likely won't be saying no during this year long separation.
Meanwhile Slick is the text book definition of a cuck. He is never depicted as sleeping around since meeting Jade, and has only thought of Jade even as she is fooling around with others.
Honestly it comes off so one-sided against Slick that I find myself hoping for a chapter that finally has Slick trying to find someone new while Jade is following him apologizing for her behavior.
I mean really...he lies so she gets to side line him for a year as he has to constantly prove he is sorry...meanwhile she is riding all the stallions she wants trying to forget about him...yeah that seems fair, and not at all toxic for a relationship...
to discord, because if anyone would know this, it would be him, genetically speaking, how maleable are changelings, hypothetically, if i were to... obtain... a few live samples and incorporate them in, lets say, a zerg brood, what would the success chances be?
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To get back to original point of my first post I agree that people do dumb things when they are angry and hurting. I am saying that it is one sided in how you have written the fallout from it. Jade gets to have her angry at her ex date around thing, but where is Slicks? Where is the part where Slick gets angry or despondent and tries to fill the void in heart?
If you want to write a messed up toxic relationship that is fine, but you have everyone around them agreeing with Jades actions and Slicks inaction.
There should be at least a few ponies or Lings telling Slick to move on, or that Jade is an idiot that doesn't understand.
Are you honestly telling me that not one ling or pony is on Slicks side? Not one?
It is unrealistic.
Question for Jade: "Do you actually plan to get with Slick after the year and a day is up, or will you continue to lead him along and then say no?"