Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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sequel?
Awesome story!!!
A shame this ended, but alas: all stories must.
Thanks for sharing this one with us, and I look forward to any works in the future that involve this universe. It's an interesting concept and I'm eager to see where it goes
Into the favorites it goes!
So does Chrysalis look like how the new changelings do in the cartoon, where they are multi-color and not full of holes, or is she still black like she was before when she was the Queen?
Wait? This is the end? I thought I am going to see the full detail of the Changeling Express Incident, or how the drones adapt to life of normal ponies in Crystal Empire (right now they just live in the Castle) and how locals adapt to the newcomers.
*locks you in the "demands a sequel" cuffs*
This is the end? that was kind of fast.
I can say this story is super good and totally awesome.
but I am wondering will their be a sequel?
This seems like a rather...abrupt place to end this. I'm hoping there will be a sequel or at least some sort of epilogue.
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I have to agree, it seems like an abrupt ending, though I'll also say that Chrysalis' relationship with Big Mac also seems quite abrupt too. There could have been one or two chapters dealing specifically with the formation of their relationship.
Kek kek kek, Chrysalis is a waifu stealer! We figured Mac would probably fall for her, but now it's practically an unspoken marriage proposal!
We wonder if Chrysalis' change was brought on by her practically abandoning her hive? Speaking of, a few loose ends need to be tied up, will there be an epilogue?
Keep going! ;)
I really like where this chapter has steered the story. Probably my favorite chapter so far. Good work, Damaged.
Sequin pls
And it goes into bookshelf for finished stories.
Yay!
But, yeah, a little abrupt ending. Maybe there could be a sequel with next few days of events?
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I do plan to do some epilogues. The reason I ended it was this was creeping all over the place, and was in danger of becoming a world-fic rather than a Shining Armor fic. Things that will hopefully get a look in as epilogues:
Flurry Heart
Chrysalis in Ponyville
Recovering The Badlands Hive
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Ooh! World fic branch get!
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I totally understand I have watched story's go down hill from that, and yes you picked a good place to end the story.
I was thinking of a story looking at Chrysalis and Mack in Ponyville. more of a side story to fill in the mane story.
8294883 Oh, if you want to write something in world be my guest. It wouldn't be "canon" to the rest of this, but I don't mind people using my ideas and running with them.
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Okay but that doesn't answer my Queen, does Chrysalis look like how Thorax and the other changelings doe after season 6's season finale or does she look still like herself but as that good version of herself from the IDW comic?
8294922 I described her of being mid height between a drone and a queen, with both head/tail fin and mane/tail. I am not aware of what IDW have done with her, those comics are mostly fairly miles off from canon.
I would have mentioned if it looked like Mr. Bean had attempted to paint them.
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🤣 me trying to wright that is so rich, I am lucky if I can do comment's most of the time.
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I see. Well, at least they won't run out of nannies for Flurry Heart.
Happy endings all 'round!
8965949 Of course! It's a story about ponies.
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