Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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To Sunburst, what does he think about his boss becoming a changeling and where is Flurry Heart in all this time?
I think this was actually one of you best chapter along with Rarity' appearance for this story. I like how you seem to present Shining armors anguish about his change and show so well how much of a kind heart Cadence has by putting a good front of love and support for Shining where his world is crumbling all around him, and his only unshakable rock around him is her.
Still I wander if even Cadence will need support herself to get thought this at some point.
good job
7583911 This is only a few weeks after A Canterlot Wedding. Flurry isn't even a twinkle in their eyes yet and Sunburst is just a deadbeat mage. Thanks for the kind words!
Shining drew back from the kiss with his wife and turned. A changeling was passed out, among the guards. "You were right, Cady. Excuse me, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, we have a new friend to talk to.
he never stood a chance the love poring off the too is like trying to stop a sinking ship with a teaspoon.
shifting gear - shifting gears
Still feel like - Still feels like
efforts are aligning - efforts at aligning
leaned forward and rolled sideways - leaned forward then rolled sideways
finish off this - finish this off
to the destination - to their destination
leaned in to Shining - leaned into Shining
magic laced through the heavens - Hmmm... not sure if 'laced' is a typo. Is that like gossamer strands of magic in a lacy pattern, or beams of magic that 'lance' out like laser beams?
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And Cadance rolls up another covert operative to be converted and re-tasked with rescuing more changelings from Chrysalis. They will save the species one drone at a time
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I've read a lot of fanfiction and professional fiction, and this is the first time I've seen anyone write about this particular little after-sex phenomenon. Kudos to you, sir!
7584914 Thanks for the fixes, and yes, laced was right. They really don't have much hope, when Cadance and Shining are sharing love like that. But they will learn to have hope, with their new queens.
7584914 I think I have seen it once, in a Laurall K Hamilton book. It is a waste not to use it as a way to show a male as being particularly virile, or lead into a great bathing scene... or both!
Question to Shining: what will you name your first egg?
Lovely. They really have a good system going on. We wonder how long it will take for them to start noticing...
To the newly acquired guard: was it good for you, too?
Keep going! ;)
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Wait, so that WAS Cadance rushing off to void a particularly large load of Shinings? I was wondering if that was it or not.
7585340 It doesn't need to be a "particularly large" load.
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Question mark?
Huh. I wonder if the changeling infiltrators in the Empire are aware of the Crystal Faire. Might be a bit rough on their subterfuge when a giant wave of pony love adjusts the local thermostat...
That train may have already left the station.
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Silly question for the day, why do the authors here all use them & they when referring to an individual?
A little disorientating.
7592639 Late answer for the day: it's becoming customary (at least where I hear English) to use 'they' as a general genderless pronoun - that is, instead of 'he' or 'she' when those are inappropriate for some reason. Given that the changelings here are at least somewhat androgynous, 'they' may well be the best pronoun for the job.