Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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I somewhat regret reading this at work. It was... distracting. Nothing was going to make me stop, mind you.
Well I think shining is finally adjusting to his new situation really well so far. I can't wait to see what this is going to build it up to. I like the idea the the Crystal Empire reaffirm its independence. I wander how their dealing with the Yaks is going to be like when it will come to make trade agreements. So what do the Prince of the Yaks of this move from the Crystal Empire? Is Rarity going to me more active in the Crystal Empire now, will she be appointed to a new role to help with the administration or public image of the Crystal Empire and its rulers? What sort of cake recipe would win over Celestia support for the Independence of the Crystal Empire?
I guess SA is ageless now, too. At this rate Cadance is going to thank Chrysalis for her wonderful wedding gift. I can just about imagine her face.
7762624 Woops, fixed. Also, I tried to make fairly sure everypony would know where it was going, particularly when Cadance teleported (a much less instinctive and perfect version than her sister-in-law uses, mind) to their bedroom.
So, now Shining is to get a lesson in feminine care, well, at least until he can find Careful and work out how to swap back.
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Oh, I am by no means complaining. I just wish that I had instead read it in an environment where I could have given it a much more undivided measure of my attention.
I have read your other stuff, so I know how good you are at writing erotic scenes, but I think that I should congratulate you on writing a scene that shows the love between them. Some authors never seem to learn what possibilities become available between partners that trust each other utterly.
Question for Lady Rarity: "As Queen Princess Mi Amore Cadenza is teaching Shining Armor about "feminine care" will you teach her the correct mannerisms and intricacies behind being a lady?
Ok, so Celestia only knows the mail was being intercepted, we get it now.
Luna gets to send a spy? Oh dear, this ought to be interesting...
Keep going! ;)
ok this chapter got heated really fast. I must admit it would be rather interesting playing with a changeling a your self.
'effort' or 'effect'?
7763553 Thanks, got it!
One correction
glorying in how she tastes to her changeling
Story is all past tense so "tasted"
7763739 Thanks. All fixed.
Question for Cadance (forgive me princess if it is a bit weird.....)
Would you consider becoming part changeling to experience the levels of love your husband(wife?) now feels? Or perhaps have Careful teach you a spell to feel it
Wait... Why wouldn't Cadance and Shining let the princesses know about Shining? I don't mean in the hall, in front of all those guards; I mean afterward. This seems like the perfect point for one world ruler to reassure the others that nothing bad is happening, but nope, the two who're most likely and capable of acting are kept out of the loop. Like they're being set up to cause problems.
And this is after they already have a clandestine arrangement with Celestia regarding changelings.
Needs to be 'her' sister's tone
9109758 Fixed, thanks!