Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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Wow, Sunset doesn't know the situation she's in. When you broke the law in foreign soil, you go to foreign court, not yours.
Thinking about this . . . is this the reason why Celestia moved the mirror from Canterlot to Crystal Empire?
Question to Rarity : Do you want to go through the portal to check on the fashion ideas from the other world? Maybe, from the other you?
No rainbow! The world can't handle all that awesome in one place!!!
When is Chrysalis showing up again?
8136757 You will note that since she declared she was going to infiltrate, only 1 day has actually passed.
8134690 you win....
to leave a tell-tale markers - to leave a tell-tale markers
remembered he is a changeling - remembered he was a changeling
Another good chapter!
I wish I could feel some sympathy for this Sunset Shimmer, but at the moment she has no way to develop or redeem herself. Perhaps by serving her sentence in the Crystal Empire she willlearn more maturity.
I do find it interesting though, that you've painted her having an arrested, no pun intended, psyche. She never grew past whatever it was that led to her falling out with Princess Celestia. It's a pleasantly surpising bit of characterization and it really works here.
8137005 Heh, all fixed. And yes, I decided on a different take to Sunset and Celestia here. Neither are "bad," but Sunset has been treated like a child her whole life, so she has never been given the chance to take responsibility for her actions and "learn to adult."
And then Sunset became an indentured servant for until she could prove she's grown up and can act like a real mare!
To eGleaming: how will you explain that in the formal report?
Keep going! ;)
Question for The Baroness of Beauty, Ruler of Regality, Heiress of Hedonism, Siren of Salaciousness Queen Chrysalis: "How are you plans coming along? Will you be making a move soon?"
I like this version of the how and why of Sunset.
his is going to play out interesting.
Not certain so I'll just point at it and ask, do thoughts use quote marks, most times I see them with a single apostrophe at either end to show it's not speech?
Changeling Gleaming: So changeling pony Gleaming what did you think of EQG Gleaming as a human
guarderr watch-a-ma-call-it....policewoman? Did you like her carriage?