Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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[In the story discription]
Again with the 'Everypony' thing
Stop refering to others as ponies, its racist
Or is it speciest?
Anyway, what if some one is a dragon?
Or a tree?
or a dogthing?
or a mutant ant made of poop?
or an apache helecopter?
everyone would be better, as it includes all of those
I mean, sure, you really love the show, or the fandom, but the word everypony is like saying everywhiteman
BUT you dont need to listen to me, I'm a random guy on the internet
you do you bb
Question for Queen Shining Armo~~~ *crash* GET BACK HERE YOU SNEAKY LI *clears throat*
Question for Prince Shining Armor: "Are you excited to introduce yourself to the newest members of your hive?"
To Straight Horn: *taps on head* Hello, anyone home? *taps again*
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Why are there so many random comments lately referring to Apache choppers everywhere?
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7992481 TRIGGERED! But honestly, the reason I typed that was... I tend to always type like that because I write upwards of 2k pony-words a day. It leaks over, deal with it. I certainly do not mean it to be a slur any more than ponies in the show do.
I can not even thing of the power behind that way of love and how hard it hit all the changelings in that hive.
So much love.
and I am going to say Shining Armor is all but changed to full Queen at this point.
. . . and the main confrontation is beginning to unfold.
Question to Celestia: If changelings are proved to be able to live alongside ponies in the Crystal Empire, will you consider to welcome changelings in Canterlot?
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sall' good m8
it was just a joke i do
The Princess of Shipping, of course. I don't see what you could possibly be nervous about
Question for Celestia : how do you think the reaction will be if shining armor get found out with the populace?
Time for Chrysalis to get cucked. This was a big gripe for me in the original. I really wish it wouldn't happen in this version of the story. Just.. have her fuckoff elsewhere once she realizes Shining is a queen.
7992997 Cucked? Okay, I am going to vent a little here.
"Cucked" or "Cuckold" is a fetish/situation when a male in a relationship is supplanted by a third party (of course I say "fetish" because everything can be a fetish, and this is actually one of mine).
Chrysalis is female, so quite literally cannot be cuckolded in the raw definition of it, but I have seen it changed from "male" to "dominant" in the relationship. So, my question is, apart from Shining Armor (which Chrysalis was never arguably in a relationship with), how is she getting cuckolded?
7993036 Cuckqueaning then. And I' deliberately misused the word cuck there. Bad habit from exposure to people who misuse it. I just hated how chrysalis, who inlove with shiny, now gets to live the rest of her life with that unrequited love in her face with her nemesis tapping that every night, probably within ear shot. Thats honestly low and nasty.
Id honestly really prefer if you didn't have chrysalis move into the shining hive.
7993185 As a writer I find misuse of English a little bit of a trigger. But regardless, the point you make is valid, although that is the whole point of this fic. There were some heavy themes in the "comedy version" that just weren't explored enough, and couldn't be handled well enough and keep the theme it had. So right here is where things will become more intense. This retelling is going to explore things in much more detail, and as has been commented things are going a little off-script this time around.
Will Chrysalis join the Crystal Hive? Yes. That was a huge plot point. Will it be handled exactly the same as the other story? Definitely not.
Ooh! Hive Link get!
Chrysalis' reaction here is very natural, knowing no better she can only assume Cadance used the same kind of destructive love-bomb thing, which (when applied to an enclosed space like a warehouse) would be devastatingly quick to dispatch all targets within. (splat!) the reality is of course different, but the signs indistinguishable at that distance.
They were really lucky they seemed to have hit every single ling in Canterlot, and especially so that they got the one infiltrating the guard.
That feels like a slight plothole actually,why didn't the guard detect Shining?
To Chrysalis: how rusty are your infiltration skills?
Keep going_ ;)
7993522 That "plot hole" might be a better question than the one you actually asked.
I finally have a question for one of your characters!
*asked politely and respectfully* Queen Chrysalis, why do you not withdraw, lay eggs to rebuild your numbers and bide your time to try again?
7993522 Ponies are much denser than walls, why wouldn't changelings be the same way? Anyone indoors would be thrown clear leaving a changeling-shaped hole in the wall.
Needs 'slice' to be past-tense as 'sliced' to match the rest of the sentence.
8813133 Fixed, thanks!