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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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"Oh, it's such a perfect day,/I'm glad I spent it with you./Oh, such a perfect day,/You just keep me hanging on,/You just keep me hanging on." -Lou Reed, 'Perfect Day'

Father's Day on the rock farm is a special day for Igneous Rock Pie. However, the family is incomplete; Pinkie Pie is running late to the festivities. As they wait for the pink pony, things get a little contentious. Just where is Pinkie?

Written for Father's Day 2016.

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Comments ( 3 )

That was a sweet father's day story. Good job. :twilightsmile:

This was a sweet, simple story. I have a couple of nitpicks: Igneous isn't that old; he's middle-aged. And I would have liked to see more Elizabethan English from Igneous and Cloudy Quartz. But there was nothing that ruined the story for me.

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