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Hm.
Twas good, but I feel like Shining wouldn't have just given up on Cadance that fast, especially with a former enemy. As far as he knows, the Changelings might kill him to extract the love from him.
But yeah, was still pretty nice though
No offense intended, but I'm guessing you don't speak English very well? The paragraphs are large blocks of text, and the sentence structure is poor, I would advise a bit more practice.
I actually enjoyed this, I love how they were able to be together without Cadance. But it sucks the army is still there, waiting...