Three months after the failure of the changeling invasion, Queen Chrysalis and her changelings have found themselves starving in a wasteland just outside of Equestria. Not knowing where the hay they have wandered, Queen Chrysalis decides to throw up her hooves and return to Equestria to make a deal with the ponies. The changelings can stay and feed off of the love of the ponies for nourishment, but if they are caught engaging in malicious activity against the ponies of Equestria, then the changelings will be banished from Celestia's fruitful lands. How will Queen Chrysalis fare whilst living in harmony with the ponies? Will she be driven insane by these technicolor equine's jocund natures, or will she suffer in silence?
The cover art was drawn by me, and you can find it here: http://lol3evee.deviantart.com/art/My-Little-Changelings-Return-to-Equestria-Fanfic-506438497
Its not bad, but first you were going about that they can't fly in rain (actually insects can fly in rain, its mor that they are not heavy but thier wings just glue to each other, you could say that water disrupt they natural magic for flying or something ) and little later they fly just after rain stopped... uh
Chrysalis is way to nice, not to changeling just overall she don't say how she despise that idea and she don't plot anything its just bad. We clearly see she is type of going to plot how to backstab (episode and comic) and she is highy and mighty attitude person.
I for one enjoy seeing a different side to her and not all insects can fly in rain, for example bees can not fly in rain and besides who cares anyways it doesn't have to be cpcompletely realistic. Anywho i do hope you keep writing i wish to see what becomes of this
5495950 Thank you for the input.
To the editing page I go!
Aww that's so cute! A wave of changelings! I imagined the cutest chibi changeling times a million licking Celestia. What a glorious story friend!
Please tell me that there will be another chapter sooooooonn?!!!
5567093 Thank you! ^^
5568088 I am working on a new chapter as of now, so there's no need to fret.
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Yaaaay thank youu
dead?