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I'LL RETURN TO REGULAR FATPONE AFTER THIS WORRY NOT
Lesson here? If you bully somepony, make sure they're not friends with the local royalty.
7177059 Just don't bully anypony who knows somepony who knows magic, period.
Two and two together. . .
Oh. . .
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I'm probably missing something and it's probably not literal, but how can Flash do a Changeling scan on Shining? He's a Pegasus.
7177137 It was more to show just how freaked out Flash was than anything. He was looking at Shining for green eyes or anything else that might be a clue.
By "Benefits", Shining has about 70 pounds over Flash. Now it's a full hundred? Much better~ *insert " it's over ∞~! "what does the scouter say about Shining's softness" joke here*
7177346 Phat horse is phat.
7177521 Who knew Shining as a 400 pound growing fatso would be so Celestia-damn adorable? Besides, y'know all your viewers? :P
"Groaning, Shining heaved his four hundred-pound bulk to his hooves and waddled slowly out of his office." Unless he was groaning about having to deal with these two, methinks Shiny may be getting a bit too out of shape. Granted, in my opinion there's no such thing as "Too big" but Shining still has to make rounds at his size. ;)
7179541 Yeah, I kinda have a thing for out of shape ponies...
Well I suppose that you couldn't keep on talking about C, FS and SA bed actives, it get redundant after a time. But, I feel that you where rather timid with the punishment of the two Guardsponies, and that you could have gone further with the idea of turning them into cake to humiliate them. Maybe turning them into pony shape food that could still move and FS hunted them to eat them, or maybe SA chould have given them a hunger spell that would make them eat more and get to be ridiculed by the other Guards for it. I still hope to see more of this story soon again.
7180968 Thanks for the feedback. Looking back, I did seem to go through the punishment scene a wee bit fast.
7180998 well actually, the up until the time of the punishment , the story was really great. It is just that with all the buildup, I feel that the punishment was underwhelming for me
So, what kind of playful teasing does Flash get from his other friends? And on an unrelated note while on the subject of fat Shining, can we expect more Shiny/Twiley adorableness?
7181454 You most certainly can!
As kind-hearted and gentle as Shining Armor is, do NOT screw with those close to him. I'd have suggested Shining sitting on them, but let's face it, that would be a REWARD not a punishment.
7186939 Perhaps a month of cleaning the castle's septic tank?
If i were a pony i'd love to be able to get a job at the castle, just to see the obese prince's plump angelic face smile at me as i serve him.
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>tfw you're reminded that you'll never serve a big fat Shining his daily box of doughnuts
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I'd love a fic of Flash spending time with his comrades. Maybe something where they go somewhere off duty and the guards bare witness to just much their friend and their captain can glut themselves. I'm curious: does Flash have anypony he's particularly close to among the other guards besides Shining? Y'know, somepony he can talk to and who can help pick him up (or try to dohohohoho) after a day of enduring these two?
7190620 Never actually thought about anypony Flash would be particularly close to, actually. There's an idea for a future fic...
I can't help but think that the other guards affectionately tease Shining off-duty over the hypocrisy of having a 400+ pound butterball as their boss.
7201771 Not to his face, but they love poking fun at him behind his back. And a certain few like thinking about how dreamy he is...
7201781 And there's PLENTY of back to talk behind. Not to mention, even in his armor, Shining's plot is completely uncovered.
7201830 Dammit, now I've got fat stallion booty in my head and it won't go away.
7201836 As if that's a bad thing? ;)
It might just be me, but ever since he was introduced into this series, it seems like Flash has been overtaking Shining.
7207392 Oh, you're mistaken there. Shining shall always hold the Fat Stallion Throne.
7207404 I actually meant it feels like he's getting more attention. With the exception of Benefits, it feels like Shining's taking a backseat.
7207431 Hmm. Maybe it's time I did another fic with just Shining and Cadance.
Super cute image alert! Shining as Santa Hooves! He's already got the warm kind personality and infinitely soft warm tummy~!
7224307 Lemme check, and... yep, I've got Shiningbetes. Cheers, mate.
Getting turned into cake and eaten is still getting off too easily in my opinion. Again, if this was the US Marines, Steel Wing and Flintlock would run absolutely ragged until Semper Fidelis is pounded into their bucking heads.
Shining has openly praised Flash's exemplary marks and unwavering dedication to serving his kingdom, and he's still only a dang private?
7232993 Well, he can't be seen to be showing favouritism, either. I've read that nothing will break trust in a squad faster than favouritism or nepotism.
So, how long until Shiny's belly starts dragging on the ground, or is he there already? ;)
7237457 Wait 'til he hits the 600-pound mark.
I kinda wish i had a reference for how big Shining is. One simply can't look up "400 pound pony" and be done with it, sadly.
Wonder if Cady has any special pet names for her big fat hubby?
One line of this story makes it seem like Shining's size is starting to catch up with him. Could we possibly see the possibility of Shining passing his round-making duties on somepony else or finding an alternate way of making them? (Hm.....Shiny on a mobility scooter
)
7294885 Ooh, I do love me some out-of-shape fatpone. Sweating and wheezing as they waddle about under the hot summer sun...
You know, Flash IS still a soldier, whereas Shiny is more of a figurehead with a desk job. Begs the question, how big can Flashy get before he has to slow down a bit for the sake of his job?
7321472 Good question. Ten or twenty more pounds and I'd say a promotion and a desk job await him.
This shows what happens when you do Shining wrong. But if you do a good job? You get praised and smiled at by a 400 pound growing adorable butterball. And who knows? If you do particularly well, you might even get a hug.
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For Christ's sake, now I'm jealous!
7332182 And if you really, really piss him off? He just might decide to turn you into a cake and keep you that way forever...
7332234 Oh, please, Shiny's way way too nice for that.
7332250 I dunno, I can think of certain scenarios. Treason, messing with his family...