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Jmaster99


May or may not include Transformers and Female versions of his O.C. (Now with Clop)

Comments ( 21 )

Good story; loved it :heart:

7173078 Thanks. Glad you did.

hmm well written gj

7176173 it has more like than I have followers incredible

7184586 Your very much welcome! Would love to see a squeal. I don't really give a dam about spelling requires to much brain power witch I don't have and will cause my brain to explode. :derpytongue2: :derpytongue2:

7184723 I have something planned for later. Not really a sequel, but it will be written like this.

This is pretty good. Well done. :twilightsmile:

7215847 Thank you. Glad you liked it :pinkiesmile:

The clop was good, but the family only reminds me of Grey family. And yes, I mean the family from Fifty Shades of Boring (I'm making fun of the book, not the fic). Plus, the two could've at least sparked their want before hand rather that an akward situation going for the better. Sunset could've described her situation and then say how pent-up it makes her, or the guy could've said all the right words.

Overall, the clop was
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The story just could've been better than "Sex. It's always happening in this household with me'sister 'round."
7/10

7266713 Thanks, Also to that GIF :rainbowlaugh:

This is a very nice story, my friend. Great job. :twilightsmile:

7299685 Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it :yay:

The story was so wholesome at the start that I completely forgot it was gonna be a clop, you sly bastard

She grabbed her beasts and replaced her hand with them.

A girl of many talents and a man with brass balls, I see. :rainbowdetermined2:

She kept on bobbing up and down as she wrapped your staff around her breasts.

Now THAT is what I call limber! :pinkiecrazy:

You kept switching back-and-forth between tenses, and it seemed to escalate way too quickly at the end. Otherwise, I liked it.

I feel like this should get a sequel.

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