May or may not include Transformers and Female versions of his O.C. (Now with Clop)
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They were just teenagers. The last thing they expected was to become power rangers. Discover with them as they realize just how important they've become.
I cannot promise it, but I will try to update at least once a month.
Some gender-swapped characters.
Nyx is owned and created by Pen Stroke.
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go go pony rangers
Author has personally requested a review of this story from me.
Why is there a period at the end of your title? The title isn't a sentence.
principal's
...we're doing gender-swaps here? Why? For what purpose?
Do schools even still DO the Pledge of Allegiance? Also, what's with the "moment of silence" thing? Did someone die? This is confusing.
less than
"What? No!"
First team should be 'teams'
These sentences should end in periods, not question marks.
quiet
back in the file
This should end in a question mark.
phone
sitting
Angel should be capitalized here.
Run-on sentence.
Run-on sentence.
Missing a couple of words in this sentence.
let go of Blitz's arm
outside
its
too
Delete that 'a' in both of the above.
Poor phrasing, and the names of colors shouldn't be capitalized at this point.
Missing words at the end there.
Somewhere
vehicles
Opinions on the story itself:
I don't like your OCs. They're pointless, flat, and dull.
Blitz evading expulsion by telling the principal something he, as school principal, should already know makes no sense whatsoever.
Spitfire acting as though there's no way the principal could possibly know the sports teams are on bi-week makes no sense whatsoever, because this, again, is the sort of thing a school principal would know about.
Your descriptions of clothing and costumes are terrible.
Making Rainbow Dash and Rarity into boys just so you can have a 3-guys/2-girls team is ridiculous.
I won't be reading the second chapter of this, sorry.
5753813 Thank you for reviewing it. I appreciate your comments.
P.S. I live in Texas. The pledge is done before the school day starts with the moment of silence following it.
5753831 more chapters please go go pony rangers
5781435 i am on it. i just have a lot of school work to do.
Wow. All I gotta say is I loved wild force and that's what got me started on the power rangers series, good job in my book
5946895
Thanks.
5946898 np bro
5946898 I think your stories are awesome
6219365
Nice! I really like how you portrayed Elusive in this chapter and I can tell why the shield was the weapon you gave him. If I had to rate this story I'd give it a 17/10. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work man!
6369615 Thank you.
6369637 no problem, and hey who knows it might get a reading on youtube
.With your permission of course.
6369682 If anyone is willing to read it, they can go for it.
6369684 K, I was just asking if it was ok for me to read it in a video.
6369698 Go for it. Give a link when you are done.
6369707 alright, just a warning this would be my first few videos so sorry if I mess up anything
6369712 It is alright if anything happens. I am very forgiving.
Did someone rewrite this story