A Shimmering Sun

by Jmaster99

First published

After the Fall Formal, you couldn't help but feel that Sunset needed someone. After being there for her, you realize just what she need.

With the Fall Formal having ended, you can't help but feel sorry for Sunset. She might turned you into a mindless zombie, but it wasn't that bad. After being there for her, you realize she might want to be more then friends.

All characters are depicted as 18 or older. Hope you enjoy.

UPDATE: In the popular stories section on the day published. That was fast.

A Shimmering Sun

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You let out a sigh as you look out the window wishing you were free instead of in first-period English on a beautiful Monday morning. As you daydream about doing anything else, the door opens. You, along with the rest of the class, turn to see who it is.

It was Sunset Shimmer.

Some go back to doing what they were doing, while others give Sunset a nasty look. You can't say that you blame them, all with the Fall Formal incident, but you don't think it's right. You tell yourself that she isn't the person she was before, but that is all you got. As you watch her sit down, you realize that she has noticed you. Embarrassed, you look back out the window.

Thoughts start running through your mind. The one is that what if she thinks you're a creep. You wouldn't deny that she looks amazing, but you were looking for too long. You notice a group of students near you leave, but you think nothing of it until you nearly jump out of your skin as you felt a light tap on your shoulder. Nearly.

You tun around to see that Sunset is sitting next to you. You're surprised since she normally sits on the other side of the room, but as you take a quick glance you realize she wasn't going to be able to sit there anytime soon. The group of girls wasn't going to move. This also explained the group leaving. You give her a small smile and are given a faint one back. Remembering that there were a few minutes before class starts, you decide to strike up conversation.

"So have things been going since, you know?" You didn't want to straight out say Fall Formal, let alone mention it in reality, but how else were you going to strike up conversation. You were pretty sure that you wouldn't know anything about nearly running several students lives as well as rule the school under a iron fist, so why not try to talk about something you both can discuss.

She fidgets before she answers. "Oh. They've been okay. I mean after Twilight left she let her friends watch over me, and they have been nice, but..." She looks down as you see something cross her eyes. Guilt? Regret? You're not entirely sure, but you could tell she wasn't happy.

"It's almost as if they don't really care, right?" She looks up at you as she sees that you want to continue this conversation and not someone who wants to get back at her. It feels as if she is happy and wants to keep talking, despite the sad look on her face.

"Yeah. I mean it feels like they want to care, but they can't figure out why they should. I even see them with people they care about in that way, and I am reminded that I have no one." You couldn't believe she was talking about this. It almost looked as if she was going to say something else when the teacher, Mr. Whooves, came bursting through the door out of breath. In that instant you saw the light that was building up in her eyes disappear. You told yourself you would see it again.

"Sorry...I...am, whoo, late, but there... was a..." Whatever he was going to say was stopped by the announcements and him falling back in his chair as if he had fainted. Vice-Principal Luna's voice was the one giving the announcement instead of Celestia.

"Attention Students. After the unfortunate incident that happened at the Fall Formal, classes will be canceled after first-period and tomorrow as well. You are to stay in your classes and do your assignments, and anyone that does leave during first-period will be counted as absent for both days and it will be held against them. That is all." You looked over at Sunset as she sunk into her chair. You could hear the murmurs about her, and was pretty certain she could as well. Then you overheard some girls that, while they were quite enough, they made sure Sunset could hear.

"Only one class today? That's amazing!"

"Looks like she could do something right."

You looked at Sunset sink even lower, and it looked like she needed her friends, or anyone for that matter, more then ever. You were furious, but you kept quiet. The fact that her "friends" weren't here is what made you madder. Weren't they supposed to be helping her? You saw that she needed help now. Then an idea popped into your mind. You pulled out a piece of paper and wrote a message real quick, folded it up, and handed it to Sunset. She looked at you as you she grabbed the paper and opened it. She sat back up and read over the note. "Really?" She looked as if she were about to cry from what you hopped were tears of joy. "I can?"

"Yeah. My family is out this week, and it is just me and maybe a staff member or two." She looked confused as you said that last part. "Oh right. I forgot that nobody knows. My family is well off, and we have a nice house." You watch her eyes go wide as her jaw figuratively hit the floor. From what you could tell, she was in shock.

"You're rich?" You nod as she looked at her desk and back at you. She brought her finger up and drew a circle in the air. "Then why do you dress like this?" You shrug. "I don't like dressing, or acting for that matter, rich. It is too stuffy for my taste, but you should the rest of my family though. I am actually fancy compared to them when they are not on business. My sister is actually a nudist." She looks like a twelve-year-old boy that just heard the word "ass". Though she is stifling it, she won't stop laughing. This causes you to stifle your giggles as well. The two of you continue on until the class is over.


The two of you are walking out after the class ends. She won't stop talking, and you can't help but listen. You would have never guessed that this girl that nearly killed six people would be so nice. She was radiant, and you could just listen to every word she said. It was like music to your ears. You reach into your pockets and pull out your keys. While you open your door for her so she could get in, she gives you a smile that could make even the strongest men weak in the knees. You kept it together, but only enough to make to the drivers side. Once you sat down you felt as if you weren't going to stand back up anytime soon, and you were fine with that. You start your car and you drive away from the school. You notice Sunset looking around in amazement.

"It's a nice car, isn't it?"

"Yeah. It is nice and roomy as well." You hear her take a deep breath. In an almost sad tone she continues speaking. "I thought you didn't like to live as if you were rich?"

"I said I don't like to dress and act rich. Nothing about enjoying a thing or two." You look over at her as you stop at a light. "What's the matter?"

"Why did you help me?" You literally found yourself speechless. Not at what she said, but how she said it. Thinking for a second or two, you finally answer her. "Because you look like you needed a friend. That's why." She looked back at you. You just smiled. It seems she understood what you meant and smiled back. "My house is just around this corner." She nods and you continue driving.

As you pulled up, you couldn't help but look at Sunset as she was in shock at the size of your house. You couldn't help but laugh at her reaction as she mouths the word "wow". She looks at you and you quickly look away realizing you might have made a mistake. You mentally chide yourself for that laughter as you and Sunset walk to the door. As soon as you open the door, you both are greeted with you sister and her boyfriend on the couch going at it like a couple of rabbit's in heat. You look over at Sunset and see her face is redder then her hair. You go over as your sister is too busy riding her boyfriend to notice you.

"A-hem." She freezes and looks at you. You look at her boyfriend, who looks as if he is on cloud-nine, and figure it best not to disturb him. "Aren't you supposed to be out with your friends trying to save the Everfree forest?" She shakes her head and gives you a pissed of look.

"The CEO of Umbra Co. decided to look it over and it got rescheduled, and after hearing about the Fall Formal nearly being ruined from someones little sister, I decided to come back and see how you were doing, but it appears you might need something else." Giving you a sly look, she hands you a sealed condom. You could feel your face heat up and you just want to die from embarrassment or kill her for doing that. "You know you'll need it." You snatch it out of her hand and put it in your pocket to shut her up.

"I doubt I will, but who was it that told you? 33-1/3 LB or..." She cut you off by putting her hand up.

"The other one. I can't remember his name right now, but from what he had said, his little sister apparently grew wings and could fly." As she reached for her phone, you could hear Sunset shifting around, you figure her shock has probably worn off. As she hands you the phone, she starts riding her boyfriend again. "Just put it on the table. Oh god like that!"

You look at the pictures on the phone as you start making your way. These were from Flutterhy's brother. You chide yourself for not remembering his name as well, but you feel you will remember it in a few weeks or so. You put the phone on the table and take Sunset up to your room, and while anyone else would have, and has, walked out at this point, you figure she's too lonely to want to be alone. As you walk up the stairs, she starts speaking. "Your sister was, um, interesting." You roll your eyes at that remark and let out a chuckle. "Yeah. She can be rather fun, when she is not pissing me off."

"This wasn't her first time doing... that, was it?" As you get your room, you open the door for Sunset and you both walk in. "Not even close. One year, around the holidays, she brought over all her friends. Some guy walked out of her room naked and ready to go in front of my Grandparents." Sunset's eyes widen as a she looked flabbergasted. "What did your Grandparents do?" You pinch your nose trying to remember. "I believe my Grandma tried to tip him and wouldn't stop whistling while my Grandfather told my Dad he'll have whatever he's using." Sunset couldn't hold back anymore. She fell over on your bed laughing. You got on there with her and the two of you just spent the rest of the day talking about how screwed your family would act and how she regrets what she did. You two go on and eventually the better topics outnumber the worse. After you two finish talking, you watch some 20 year-old show about a bitter 30-something year old movie critic and can't help but laugh at all the gags and jokes that went over your head when you younger and all the references you get now. Before you knew it, it was dark out. Sunset shifts as she is next to you. "Do you happen to have a bathroom nearby?"

"Yeah. I had my parents put one in my room since my sister likes to hog them." You show it to her, and by this point she has gotten used to the fact you are rich. She smiles as she goes in, and soon enough you hear the water start to run. You lay back on your bed, and as you get comfortable, you feel something shift in your pocket. It was your phone and the condom. Looking at it put sex in your mind. You felt your pants getting tight. Then you thought about doing those things with Sunset. Your pants were unbearably tight at this point. You freak out a bit because this isn't going away. You start think about everything that would kill it. The wrestling team after practice, the marching band eating lunch, and the janitor's daily duty to fix clogged toilets. You can feel it relaxing when you hear the water turn off, and your work was down the drain. All you could think about was Sunset's body and the slick water coming off of it. You had to take your pants off. You reach down, unzip, and drop trow just as Sunset opens the door. You look at her eyes and you feel like Fluttershy being forced to read aloud. You can't think. You feel as if you just ruined everything. You wanted to die, jump out the window, or do anything else but stay here.

"Hey." You were brought back to reality by Sunset. You hadn't noticed she had moved next to you. Bringing her hand up to your cheek and looked you straight in the eye. She brought you in for a deep kiss. Not one to argue, you wrap your arms around her and bring her in and make it even deeper. You could feel her tongue wrestle with your's, and while you didn't mind doing that, you weren't going to submit. Feeling her smooth wet body against your body mad you nearly loose it. You broke the kiss and went straight for her neck. She arched her back and let out the most sensual moan, and you swore if you weren't rock hard that would have made you in an instant. You heard her try to say something. "Clothes." You stopped what you were doing to look at her lust filled eyes. "Take your clothes off now." She grabbed the towel that was covering her and let it fall off of her. Sunset was underneath you naked and at your mercy. You started taking your shirt off as she went for your boxers. As soon as she pulled them down, your staff sprung up in front of her. "So wonderful." She grabbed the base as she started sucking your head. You nearly lost it. She grabbed her beasts and replaced her hand with them. She kept on bobbing up and down as she wrapped your staff around her breasts. You felt close. "Sunset. I'm..." She speed up. Her slurps more audible then your panting. The erotic noises she was making was enough to finally send you over. "CUMMING!!"

Sunset held on as best as she could, but between your legs wanting to give out and your spasming cock in her mouth you ended up falling forward and most of your cum was caught in her mouth. She gave a pop as she let it go causing you to give one last shot to land on her face. You could hear her panting as you needed a breather yourself. "That... was... amazing." Holding yourself up, you could feel Sunset get up followed by her pushing you on your back and sitting on her chest. You couldn't stop looking at her shaven pussy. It looked beautiful, and you wanted it. She was slowly scotching forward, probably trying to tease you, but you had other plans. Grabbing her legs, you manage to move her on your face. You could feel her shiver as you nestled her pussy right above your face. Sticking your tongue out, you moved it slow enough to get a breath-filled moan from her. You kept doing it, each time intentionally slower then the last, until she was making a raspy sound. Then you placed her clit in between your teeth, earning a gasp from her. You swirled your tongue around it resulting in nothing but sharp moans and breaths from her. You kept at it, not let up in the slightest. You feel her leg twitch as she lets out a long moan and a stream of fluids from her pussy. She collapses on you as if her body was drained of all energy. You continued licking up the rest of her juices when you noticed the condom. "Ready for round 2?"

You feel her move, but you can tell she is not getting up anytime soon, so you grab her with the condom in one hand. You sit up with her siting on your dick. She shivers while you rip open the package and slide it on. You grab her by the waist and hoist her up. You tease her by rubbing against her drenched lower lips. She wraps her arms around your head and shoves you into her chest. You decide to start licking her right there as you keep on teasing her. "P...p...please." You look up. "St...stop teasing and..." You slam your cock into her in the middle of her sentence as you watch her body spasm from the pleasure you have provided and denied her. Her breath as an indicator, you start thrusting into her as you push her on the bed. Your hips slam into her at a steady pace with you nearly pulling out only to fill her again in an instant. You look at her face drunk with pleasure. You see that her eyes have rolled back and she can barely say anything. As you lean down and kiss her, she wraps her legs around you forcing you to quicken your pace. You can feel that you're not going to last much longer, so you decide to go out in a big way. You stop once you are all in and thanked that she didn't fully notice. You get on your knees and grabbed her leg which she more than allowed you to do. You brought her leg up to your shoulder and started pounding away. This caused her to climax as you pushed her over. Her tightening walls hugged you well enough that you came. You came hard. You pulled out of her falling right next to her. You barely had enough energy to take the condom of and throw it away. The last thing you remember before falling asleep was the cute snores coming from Sunset.


The light coming from your window stirred you awake. Saying you felt heavenly was an understatement. You could feel a body snuggled up next to you, and she was giving of cute snores still. You wrapped an arm around her and just laid there until she started to wake. "Morning. I trust you slept well?" She gave you smile before she sat up.

"It was wonderful." You couldn't help but notice her shapely body. You just wanted to grab her, but something finally popped up in your mind, and now you couldn't think about anything else.

"Wait. Why did you have sex with me?" You could hear your inner voice yelling at you for saying that. One of the hottest girls at school had sex with you and you had to ask why. You felt like you wanted to beat yourself up.

"Because you are nice and I like you, I really needed some sexual release, didn't think you would make me feel that good though, and because I have noticed the way you look at me in class. You never were really mean to me, and that was nice." You see her looking down, and she looked so cute you had to hold her.

"So. Do you have any other plans for today?" She shook her head no. You tightened your grip around her whispered in her ear. "Then how about I help you with that."

"I thought you'd never ask."