My Little Marshmallow

by Lynked

Author's Notes

I wrote this to prove once and for all that I cannot do comedy.

So I sat down to write instead, and what I was innitially writing, was the next chapter to my other, more popular story than this will ever get (Can you imagine if this got featured?), Levitation.

But then I stumbled upon that picture. I couldn't help but write this.

It was a blast! It may not have been outstanding, nor hilarious, but it was great fun to write. Hell, I was even dancing to my surprise song for the Levitation readers when I was writing this.

Tell me what you think. I haven't a clue what the general populace is going to do to this fic.

Comments

[skyrimlegion]

PRAISE OLD SPICE
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Black jesus

[ShadowKick]

"I wrote this to prove once and for all that I cannot do comedy."

Mission success. Return to base, Red One.

[Twilicorn]

That was good. Very good. Almost a real episode, if not for the slightly crude humor. I'm now going to read levitation.

[Sunnydaze]

I thought this was actually pretty funny
A tad rushed towards the end, but it had some laugh out loud moments.

[Dickwaffle]

I actually liked this one. bravo good sir.

[Rainbow Scout]

THIS IS EXTREAMLY SILLY

[Waterpear]

The dialogue was exceptionally silly, to the point where I was expecting a Royal Guard to walk on stage and terminate the fic on account of silliness.

But it was at least amusing to read.

[Lynked]

765624 764968Well I said she dropped the vial, so I really just tried to imply that Rarity got splashed.

[BenjiCG]

764361 I CONCAVE.