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Run! Run! Or you'll be well done!

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Comments ( 18 )

This was funny, but it could definitely have used a rewrite. The way things are written make it somewhat confusing at times. The best example would be how Bulbs seems to change genders mid between paragraphs.

Have a like all the same.

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The best example would be how Bulbs seems to change genders mid between paragraphs.

That was intentional, although I don't know how well it came across. The point was the person interviewing him called him a girl and he got salty about it.

dude. you have my sincerest sympathies for continuing to work with ants in your pants.

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Yeah, sorry. Considering the whole "not winking with eyes" thing, I took his femininity a bit literally. Maybe I'm just too tired this morning to comprehend anything clearly though :applejackconfused:

7112741 It seems like every year two ant colonies fight for territory around my neighborhood: the red ants and the smelly ants. This year the smelly ants were in control, so it was especially bad, like a skunk if skunks didn't smell nice.

7112753 Nah, it's cool. I think I tried too hard on that joke and it doesn't come across naturally.

Alright, this made me chuckle more than it should have. Good work :pinkiecrazy:

7113136 Glad you enjoyed it. I felt like George Lucas when I was writing it.

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I felt like George Lucas when I was writing it.

Not sure if that's a good thing or not...

7112715 That's why this story is so good. It captures the way The Onion makes articles perfectly.

Just take a look at this one.

7113912 D'aaawww, I'm blushing!

7113342 It means I had no idea what I was doing and I aimed for flair over substance.

7112734 Yeah, this being a fanfic, most people will just assume you made a mistake.

7117333 It's the tyranny of the idiot authors, I tell you!

what the fuck is this shit

7132810 Your destiny, ant fucker.

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