Run! Run! Or you'll be well done!
[4:33:27 PM] Solocats: Aight, let me just relocate to my bed and laptop first then
[4:33:41 PM] Solocats: I prefer doing stuff with you in bed
[4:33:52 PM] Solocats: That came out wrong
[4:33:55 PM] Queueduroy: You knew exactly what you were doing there.
[4:34:00 PM] Queueduroy: Don't deny it, you slut.
[4:34:03 PM] Queueduroy: : ^ D
So for a while now something's been bugging me about how you fuckers write, and I've been guilty of it, too. I call it the "Business Factory School of Writing" after Vincent Adultman from Bojack Horseman. Don't know what I'm talking about? Then shame on you, and take a gander:
People will only read the first two sentences of your description unless they're damn good sentences, so make sure they're damn good sentences. Explaining the fine details of your story will be boring because walls of text are shit and there won't be any context; your story description is not an appropriate place to dump exposition. Explain in broad, punchy terms what people will find in your story, but don't tell them how they will find those things:
Explain the premise, not the plot.
Do me a favor and go find a handful of these stories. You won't need more than five minutes, I guarantee you. Now read their descriptions and tell me how many would lose anything if they replaced their descriptions with this:
DISPLACED STORY. I BECOME [X] CHARACTER WHILE STILL BEING MYSELF WHILE ALSO LITERALLY BEING [X] CHARACTER.
Hey, remember how Wonderbolts Academy used Lightning Dust as a foil to show that Rainbow wasn't reckless and was willing to give up her dream to do what she thought was right? Hey, remember how in Flight to the Finish Rainbow's whole point to Scootaloo was the importance of being a good team member? Hey, remember how in Gilda the Brush Off Rainbow understood hazing? Doesn't matter! Today's episode sure as hell didn't remember much about Rainbow's character, which means it's
You might want to read this first for context, it's one of Aragon's blogs.
[12:56:03 PM] Aragón: boom-yaddah, I finally fnished that blog
[12:56:05 PM] Aragón: 'sup dudes
[12:56:06 PM] Aragón: I'm back
[1:29:50 PM] Queuelroy Was Here: y0.
[1:32:38 PM] Queuelroy Was Here: Well, there are broken images in the blog.
[1:32:41 PM] Queuelroy Was Here: Good try, though.
[1:32:48 PM] Aragón: wait what
She holds this pose for several seconds, and when she moves her ass jiggles. Goddamnit, DHX, why do you do this to me?
I want to fight Limestone, and I want to break her.
[7:41:31 AM] Salacar: Anyone tried Discord? Seems like a pretty solid Skype replacement
[11:10:46 AM] Fruitlord Pear: hi
[11:11:26 AM] Fruitlord Pear: discord?
[12:04:57 PM] Queuefka Palazzo: That Q expy from S2, Pear.
[12:05:22 PM] Fruitlord Pear: [7:42 AM] Salacar:<<< Anyone tried Discord? Seems like a pretty solid Skype replacementwas responding to this tbh
[12:05:28 PM] Queuefka Palazzo: I know.
[12:05:38 PM] Fruitlord Pear: ok