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Timeless Lord Slayer


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Anther fantastic clarify mate! Also, just going to put the offer forward, but if you ever need an editor send me a pm.

Thank you friend, tis appreciated.

is that a zanbato next to me!?

For some reason, I never actually see people use the real name for the zanbato. Good on ya for knowing the real name of the type of extremely large swords.

7362008 Thanks, I wanted to make sure I got the right name, so I looked it up. Wouldn't be much of a writer without researching the field I'm writing about, right?

7362024 Same reason I looked it up myself.

7363022 Well, kudos to y' then, friend.

Ah, fantastic work my friend. Faved and tracked, but I do hope you are still working on your other story. Dark Souls: A White Knight.

7365436 Aye, that I am. Just wanted to have multiple chapters ready for more consistent updates. Though I keep running into writer's block :twilightsheepish:. But thank you, the next chapter is on the way, about a third of the way complete.

7365463 ah good to know then. Here, have a follow so I wouldnt miss your stories :pinkiehappy:

Interesting story. The only nitpick I really have is that it's a displaced story. I usually tend to avoid these kinds of fics but this one has caught my interest.

Darn it, this chapter was really short. Still, liking the story so far.

7378339 Thanks, sorry for the shortness. Most of the first ark will probably be like that. Probably. Depends on whether or not there's a crossover.

You really went the senpai route! Thumbs up JUST for that!

I personally love how the chapters start from from one thousand to two thousand words, then to fucking fifteen thousand words after the second chapter.

I've got to be honest guys: we're in for a ride here.

7461396 Oh, that's all just a matter of circumstance. Purely coincidental, eh wot?

Okay, sorry to say this but this is where I'm going to quit this story. Everything just seems so rushed, and I am cringing at almost every scene. I liked how the story started out, but I can't read anymore.

7471166 No worries. But could you at least tell me more about what seems wrong? I'd like to fix it if possible.

Poor guy. He just can't get a break from that damned chicken.

7471284 It's quite interesting, when you introduced Nito. A being built upon the many souls, to forge a single entity. Too bad they can't figure out who they all used to be, before becoming one. With so many, the very original can't remember who or what it used to be, all memories scattered and buried under one another.

I like it.

7471292 Thanks, I thought it might be neat to add that, and who knows? Maybe I'll add some bonus chapters with parts of Nito's past.

Along with Alonne's as well.

7471294 Cool. Say, want to do a crossover at some point? Not right now.

7471309 I see no reason not to. Just let me know when you are ready and willing.

7471312 Sure. Also, did you change your username?

7471325 I kinda like this one. So, I see you gonna read my one.

7471332 Thanks. And I certainly am. Admittedly, I was a bit put off by it at first with the grammatical errors, but I think I'll just push onwards, see what there is.

7471333 WHOOPS!!! Sorry about that, still working on it! I tend to forget about it at times.

7471348 Ach, do nae worry 'bout it, friend. When we begin, I'll be more than willing ta help y' out.

7471350 Thank you! Although, how would those Banshee-like creatures react to beings that slaughter Demons for a living?

7471353 Those? They wouldn't give a damn what it is, as long as it's sentient, they'll play on the fears of it, before killing them and having their shadow children devour the soul and flesh.

7471358 I don't know, because they wouldn't know what a Doom Marine is, nor figure out what they fear. They aren't that easy to read, by any means. If Demons literally shit themselves at the sight of them, what makes you think they can do worst?

7471368 Easy, all Banshees automatically know their victim(s) fear, and can make them relive their most traumatic experience with a shriek. They do have weaknesses, though, which will be revealed later.

7471370 Damn. Still, do you think they can kill a Banshee?

7471373 Sure, just have to get past the fears the Banshees bring up.

7471376 I might have an idea for that, but I'll tell you later. Not sure if it will work, but I'm hoping it will.

so no romance?:fluttercry:

7600680 Mmm, you'll just have to wait and see, I'm afraid.

I'm a simple man. I see Dark Souls, I like.

7742745 I'm glad you liked it, mate. I have a number of other Dark Souls stories, if you feel like checking them out.

Is it kill?

8321527 If you mean dead, then no. 'Tis slumbering.

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