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An indirect sequel to Pipsqueak Starts a Gang
There's a springtime dance coming up at school! Pipsqueak decides this is a perfect opportunity to ask his crush to the dance. There's just one problem: Pipsqueak Q. Hoppentrot gets tongue-tied around her! Will Pipsqueak be able to ask this filly to the dance? Or will the ups-and-downs of trying get to him first?
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I like this version of Rumble.
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I'm glad to hear that.
I was trying to give a bit of a "bro" vibe without making him sound like a frat boy. I can't objectively tell how close I got though.
7062474
Hearing him say all of his lines with his voice form the show is both cute and cool
The fact that Rumble sounds like Ralph Wiggum ponified only made this even more adorable. Poor guys, such hurdles to jump. Cute story ^^
7071939
Ralph Wiggum? That was a comparison I didn't see coming. Going back through the story, I can see the similarities though.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
7072030
I meant his voice in his original speaking appearance. In the story, he's a lot cooler/more competent.
Then again, he is still only a colt, so some goof-ups are bound to happen
Lemme give this a review:
Plot: 8/10. Funny, with great characters and smooth dialogue.
Pacing: 10/10. Even though it didn't cover a lot of time, everything was perfectly spaced. Gotta love that.
Characters: 9/10. Again, hilarious, and pretty accurate to the canon. Nice!
(+1 point for subtle ButtonBelle)
Overall: 9.25/10: would read again.
Aw, Pip! :'3
Your version of a fan last/sur name for Pipsqueak is Hoppentrot, and mine is Trottinghoof! XD
What does the Q. Of his last/surname stand for anyway?