"He's a baby dragon, Spike's just a baby, please Spikey? He just a kid, umm...Spike he nice but he is just a child" Spike heard the same words from his so call friends, everypony just called him ether just a child, baby or kid. Knowing his friends don't believe his crush on Rarity is real.
The whole thing sound crazy. Saying it just school-hood crush, nothing too big to worry about. It was going to go away in a month or at the later, is what Twilight said. It looks like it just another day all alone by himself, they're gonna leave him here on by his own.
Edited by: OmniWriter
Proofread by: Jade Crossroads & TheSpiritWolf12
(The Anniversary for 60 follows! Who knows maybe in twenty more years I would be caught up to the people who don't post any stories or blogs but still has 121 follows. Thank you all I hope you enjoy)
I do read and collect comic books, and have a plushy
I'm not a dragon I'm a brony!
7043147 Well my mind set when to that Spike and the others don't visit The Crystal Empire much in totally it was three times that how much he has been there, I think the main six been there four. So yeah that was mind set when writing
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Oh ! and I burned up Shinings copy of SuperMare #1
The grammar in this story is rather rough, not going to lie. It made it pretty hard to enjoy.
I feel like there was a story to be told here, like you had a premise, but its pretty generic and you didn't really give it enough of an edge to set it apart from similar stories.
heres the thing thats kinda always bothered me. twilight caused the egg to hatch. kindergarten is for 5 year olds, so she already got through that. so that would put her around 7/10 years old. then how ever much time passed with celestia, wouldn't that make spike at least a teen? or around 11ish?
Something click with those two.
7044080 Yeah in the show they say that Spike's just a baby dragon even through he does adult things like cook, clean, has a job with Twilight, saved the Crystal Empire. It is strange that Twilight would have got Spike when she was about eight or ten.
Why doesn't this story have a sad tag?
7051710 Because it isn't a Sad story it a Slice of Life story sad is when someone close to him died or if he thinking of doing it himself. This is my thoughts of the inside of Spike's daily life story,
Spike doesnt have that kind of freedom sweetie belle...
Sadly spike is stuck judged as a kid, while having the responsibility of an adult and gets blamed like an adult if he fails.