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Babs likes a boy, the only real problem is that no matter what she does or says, she always messes it up somehow, either by punching him, calling him names. Yeah, she a Tsundere, around the only boy that matters, her crush; Spike. Only wanting to just ask one small question
"Spike, do you want to go to prom with me?"
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Love the pic. Hilarious.
Impressive. Over six thousand words and there's not a single character interaction that'd be believable. Babs in particular has no other personality than "tsundere" and it's so cringy it hurts. Chemistry between is nonexistent; how could it exist if everyone has more or less as much personality as a cardboard cutout? Also, your grammar needs work. You have a lot of sentences that just go nowhere, suddenly ending in the middle. Not to mention typos, with the most unfortunate being "Babs just loved pubic holidays"...
Just from the description alone, I'm really not sure about this story. I like the idea of the BabsSpike rarepair, and I do think Babs would be a tsundere. But I'm not really big on the idea of her being a violent one, especially with how she changed after One Bad Apple. She'd be the type to say "it's not like I like you or anything" and lean against walls to act cool, but I really don't think she'd hurt Spike physically.
But maybe it's just because I don't really like Spikeabuse and violent tsunderes get on my nerves. As much as I love the characters, it's a no for me, but you do you. I'm basing most of this on personal preference, after all.
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Yeah, I normally don't write anything when I'm mad. But I had nothing else to calm me down. I did the best I could and I think I wrote most of this while half asleep.
Plus I did base Babs off her One Bad Apple episode because she didn't show that much personality in the only other episode she appeared in.
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Pubic holidays are hereby declared as a national Equestrian holiday, of which must be celebrated everywhere with "the talk" and angsty teenagers rioting.
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Could you please put a link of the thumbnail's original artist? I wanna see more of their work, or perhaps their name?
Here is an apropos music video!
This was pretty cute.
So you shipped Spike with them individually but what about together?
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Don't know, it will be unlikely.
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Plus him and his harem will be living in a home in Ponyville all to themselves.
BEST.COVER.IMAGE.EVER!
Baka!
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