Lightning's attempt to reconcile with Rainbow falls flat, so she seeks Rarity's help... in exchange for trying on some lewd leather lingerie.
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Alright I'll comment first, this was awesome! Very well written. No grammar mistakes from what I could spot and an interesting pairing. I'd like to see more Rarity and Lightning Dust now.
Great job! And I feel there is possibility for a sequeal.
I need you to read this to me doing an impersonation of Microsoft Sam.
My kink. Good work.
Lack of spaces between periods and words here.
Double spaces here.
I think the H in "hit me again," is supposed to be capitalized? Not sure.
The D in this instance of 'darling' in the story is the only one that capitalizes the D.
That sounded wrong.
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The best I can do is rap it in a solid Nikki Minaj impression to the beat of Microsoft 98 sounds.
Damn. I was fully expecting Rarity to suddenly take advantage of Lightning's offer, but her to react in an unexpected manner toward...
Well.
I'm pleasantly surprised at that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Very nice story.
I wish there was a sequel to this.