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It's Heart and Hooves Day and ponies all around Equestria are celebrating with their Very Special Somepony. Especially those in Ponyville. Come see how some old and new couples show their significant other how much they care for them on this day of romance and love.
This fic follows my series of fics including, in order, "Sweet Serenade", "Love and Chocolate", "The Author and The Guard", "It All Started With A Nap" and "The Clockwork Pony".
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I think you meant "quite", not quiet. Put the mistake in bold.
Is the extra 'I' supposed to be there?
Did you mean 'lightning'?
Anyways, those are just a few of the mistakes I caught while reading through it. The story was pretty okay in my opinion, despite cliche settings and all (the RariJack was a bit new, but then I don't read much RariJack anyways). I liked it. But I suggest putting spaces after your ellipsis (the '...). It's just a tiny nitpick of mine though.
As opposed to... talking not out loud?
6960138 It's a call back to the joke in "Rarity Investigates" where she thought she was monologuing in her head but then turned out she was actually talking.