With her head swirling with thoughts and emotions, Sunset decided to write them all down to get them out and help organize them. She just should have paid attention to which book she was using...
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Sunset Shimmer, you should label your diary and your journal before you write something you'll really regret.
Genius! That was pure genius!!
Oh man that was funny! Thanks!
Wallace: It's the Wrong Diary Sunset, and it's gone wrong!
I wonder if this runs under the banner of "spell" checking saves lives. Or at least massive embarrassment in this case
Oh, how this reminds me of a great Thomas Sanders vine...
That was a hillarious fimfic. I like how it didn't go the obvious path with Sunset and Twilight falling in love. Good job Blackbird
6609413 Her "Earth to Equestria" book has a huge freakin sun on both sides of the cover. The mistake is all on her
I heard of butt-dialing but never butt-diary.
This was a vey Amusing piece of work!
The part I dont get was that you said your original idea was too Inappropriate for this sight, It wasn't an Idea where Sunset writes down a dream where she and Twi are going at like rabbits is it?
If so then maybe you haven't been to Fimfiction, cause I have seen one similar fic where Twi Accidentally Draongmails a a Very detailed "For Twilights Eyes only" letter to Celestia where she wrote down a wet dream she of her and Celestia.
I have also seen worse then that here!
6618898 Keep in mind that I originally wrote this for FF.N and just recently joined this site. And over there explicit stuff has been a no-no for quite awhile. Not sure if I'll ever get too with that stuff here anyway. Just doesn't feel right with ponies or human ponies. I don't know...
6618906 ahhh. I apologize. I didnt know it had originally been on FF.net. The was Still very Amusing, it had me laughing Several times.
I'm giggling at the thought of Sunset writing out 'HAHAHAHAHAHA!!' in the magic journal,
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Oh goodness... I can only imagine the mortification. If it were me, I wouldn't be willing to so much as look at anyone for a good few years. Good luck to her. She needs it.
That would be mortifying if that happened. Poor Sunset.
Please continue this its great.
Ok, so I better get this out of the way else I end up forgetting. That said and done, though, I... don't really have much to say. It was interesting to read all that about Sunset's thoughts, but it's not like that really amounts to much happening. Similarly, the twist at the end if fun, but I saw it coming from before even starting the story. ^^U
It might have been funnier if Sunset had somehow ended up in an even more compromising situation, like... the one to reply on the book was actually Spike, and then he tells Sunset that Twilight was headed to pay them a visit, and just like that, the moment Sunset turns around, she finds Twilight standing right behind her...
...and making out ensues... well, I can dream. XD
Beyond that, not really sure what to mention. Narrative is pretty smooth and it's nice to have some insight on Sunset's character. But between it's premise and ending, it kinda feels like a refusal to a payoff. ^^U
Oh well, maybe next part will be more... makeoutish...
Also, Sunset Shimmer... your gayness can be seen from outer space!!!
Yours, "Will make it Gay" Alexander, the Godslayer.
Til next time. :P
I like that she actually considers how he fits into the equation. Depending on my mood, I like Sunlight or Flashlight (or Twixie, but that's another topic); I can't stand it when stories demonize one party or the other (usually Flash).
7017573 Trust me I know the feeling. I always try to be a little respectful to all the characters involved.
You telegraphed the joke with the title, so I'm glad the shipping was handled well. Gives this good substance. :)
I just want to take a moment of silence for my ribs.
I laughed so hard!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Sorry about the rips though.
This feels like the first chapter of a series.
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Well there ARE sequels that follow it so it kinda is.
I love these type of funny misconception/embarassing moments type of story
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Well I appreciate you liked mine as well! Thank you!
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any chance you still remember what that vine was?
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I do not, no.