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Blackbird2


A pony writer and video maker just trying to find an audience

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The others are concerned after fighting out that Twilight had been spending days in her labs working on some new experiments. Their concern only grows when they find out just what she's been working on. But she assures them that everything will be alright. That's comforting enough, isn't it?

Note: This story takes place after both my previous stories "Love and Chocolate" and "It All Started With A Nap".

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 36 )

Nice so far except for shipping with no explanation what-so-ever.

6674211 Actually the shipping is set up in my other stories "Love and Chocolate" and "It All Started With A Nap". I should probably should have mad a note of that but I'm honestly not used to having to do that. Glad you liked the story regardless.

Interesting beginning so far - it will be very interesting to see how Twilight will raise this A.I. (at last, I hope that she is more willing to accept the responsability for her than Dr. Frankenstein was in the story of the same name - after all, the robot (equinoid?) is kinda of her daughter...)

Since that you mentioned the Sci-Twilight, I wonder if we can see some messages between Twilight and Sunset/Sci-Twilight about these developments...

Tracking!

“I hear it too. And it sounds like it’s getting closer,” Fluttershy spoke up even as she slowly started to slide under the table.

This... just, this... :rainbowlaugh:

One of the genres she mentioned is something they call ‘science fiction’. Which we actually have something similar here but we call it ‘science fantasy.

Oh Twilight. Fiction and Fantasy just about the same word. With only the tiniest minute differences.

Also the robot wants pants...

So in this timeline we have Tik Tok.
In another, there is Turing Test.
Both of whom can read an entire library in a few hours.

6805444 I'm not familiar with this other one.

6806777 Ooooh right that one! Okay I HAVE seen that one but I'm trying to avoid it til I'm done with my fic so I won't be accused of stealing anything. Plus again my luck I go ahead with this idea and someone ELSE already did it! And got a feature on EqD no less!

6807042 Always room for more bots.
Tik Tok was made by Twilight after some input from Sci-Twilight.
Turing Test was repaired by Twilight after being struck by lightning.

The funny thing is that they are both T.T.
Which can stand for something else: Twilight's Toy

6807218 Huh. Funny how that works out. Didn't even think about that second thing. Sounds like Turing Test went the direct Short Circuit route while I went more for the subtle homage. Which is where Tik Tok's speed reading ability comes from.

Yay:yay: an update!
Ya' know, there's a zoom function right? Ya don't need to get so close to the screen...:trollestia:

6807789 Sorry it took me awhile to get this one out. The holidays kept me busy with other stuff.

And here I expected hi-jinx from Tik Tok being illiterate. Well I guess this works too. But the scene of Twilight trying and failing to teach her basic equestrian would have been so fun.

So is Pony-Ultron going to be a thing?

6995338 Well the robot will be but she won't be Pony-Ultron. I decided against. But still had to play up that scene for her intro.

I imagine it's a certain ethically-challenged set of twins, who better be careful lest Tik Tok go all killbot and doom Equestria... :rainbowlaugh:

7167262 Naaah she's too much of a sweetie for that. Now her CREATOR on the other hoof...

Huh... is the story finished?

It was a nice story.

7647511 Well there is at least the epilogue I plan to write up here, hopefully, soon. But the main story is over, yes. Hope you enjoyed it.

I enjoyed it. Lucky enough to find it in the update box. Also enjoyed the 2 stories before this one.

7749866 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed all of them.

Hey, it's complete! This was a fun little tale, thank you for sharing it! :pinkiehappy:

7750782 Yes it's complete complete. A YEAR after I first posted it! To the day! Which I really can't believe! But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

If this is complete, why does it still have an incomplete tag? :pinkiesmile:

7757228 Because I forgot to change the tag. That's been done now.

I hate finishing a good story, it makes me wish there were more to it :(

If you don't mind me asking, Do you have any plans for a second story?

8242242 Plans, yes. It's all a matter of balancing other projects and work to get to writing them out. I'm glad you like the story though.

“I dunno. You seem pretty real to me,” she quipped.

Ditzy/Derpy/Muffins is pure and good and I love her

“Because of this,” she pointed to her off kilter eyes, “I get a little...clumsy at times. And...honestly I’m not the smartest mare in town. So when I mess up there’s always some pony there to say ‘Oh there goes Derpy Hooves, derping it up again’!” She sighed. “I hate it.”

Oh good, another person realizes how damaging a name like Derpy could be... Except her name here is Ditzy which isn't much better

“Or our mother the cart!” Flam added, before laughing loudly again.

If I was Twilight this would be my first execution tbh

will their be a sequal

9609643
I would definitely like to do something else with Tik Tok but given that this is four seasons old now I'm not sure what I can do. And I have another story I'm working on at the moment. Glad you enjoyed this one though!

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