Just a pegasister who's a huge fangirl on the inside. She follows back and would love to be your friend! (Avatar found at http://swa-oku.deviantart.com/art/Hetalia-Fan-Art-Samovar-Teatime-360787743)
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This isn't a bad story, but there is way too much telling and not enough showing.
The description is nice. Will read later and let you know how it is
Finished reading it a few hours ago and while it is nice, it does have to much telling but no showing. Overall, if you get an editor, it will be better
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I'm not planning on getting an editor, this story's already old.
7464291 Oh. Sorry.. Still, nice story
7464328
Thanks.
7464291 Also, you still hadn't answered my previous question.
7464331
About what?
7464329 Np
7464335 What you wanted me to change in chapter 2
7464337
Oh, you don't have to change anything. You posted it on the doc, right?
7464339 I did.
7464342
I think you misunderstood something. When I said post it, I mean on the doc itself, not in the comments.
7464350 Uh... let me fix that
7464350 Ok, I sent it to you
7464358
Okay then.
7464358
I'll just paste it on the doc so everyone can see it.
7464400 Cool. Thanks. Anything else worth noting?
7464593
Not at the moment.
7464672 Ok