A twenty-one year old American male who became a brony and is too scared to admit it
While hanging out with his two friends: Cale McManus and Lightning Dust one night, Toby Mason, adopted child of Fluttershy encounters Flutterbat. Worse... He thinks that's his mother... And he's frightened.
Toby Mason belongs to APoeticHeart
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Kind of fast, don't you think?
3861593
Yeah... I didn't think it would be a good idea to make it long. You think I should've made it longer?
3861599
Eyup. Delve in there more!
3861607
I'm drafting another one-shot anyway. I'll make it as long as I could.
Meh
I enjoyed this, especially with the idea that Flutterbat could take the place of Fluttershy during the night to keep close with Toby and Fluttershy taking Flutterbat's place in the day.
It did seem kind of fast, but I still enjoyed. Looking forward to the other one-shot. 
The story is pretty legit! I mean, i like the way flutterbat doesn't eat the apple in the last part...and the part where the dude and her are sleeping in the kitchen...
I watch this to cheer me up after reading that. Here it is...
. Hope you have some laughs!
3871980
Thank you for the comment! Though you're in the wrong story. That scene is in Stop the Flutterbat. Also, what chapter are you in for the story Four Horsemen of Equestria?
I'm on the Shadowing of the rings.
yo cale you kind of left on a cliffhanger does that mean theres a sequel in the works?
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Save the Flutterbat is the sequel. Don't know if you read it or not, but that's the continuation.
5084089 heh oopsie didn't see that one yet
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All right, let me know what you think of it after you read it.
Ahh it's been a while since i read this story even after 2 years this is still a great Tobyverse Story. I'm not sure if I asked this but I'd love a sequel where Flutterbat and Fluttershy take turns raising Toby. Even having him learn to understand Flutterbat's hisses and growls. Then have a finale like his birthday where he learns that Flutterbat and Fluttershy are two different ponies and in the end he ends up seeing them both as his mother. Maybe throw in a hint when Flutterbat saves Toby from something in broad daylight to make him start to think something is off.