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Bother


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Well! I'll have to come back when I'm more alert and read this. The warning tags are scurry, yet interesting xD

Wardrobe Malfunction

What?

Well, despite the rest of your commentors apparently being confused by macrophilia, good job. On the Celestia side, I'm not a big fan of hyperpregnancy myself, but everything else was done quite well.

What happened to the third chapter?

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Bother had initially approved it but then changed his mind and told me he was unsatisfied with it. He's going to re-work it with more hyper and macro elements and then let me know once it's done. The chapter is still there, I've just unpublished it for now.

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Good. I must admit that I was pretty unsatisfied by a lack of those elements; when you ended their individual chapters with them at godlike status, I was expecting something a bit more... explosive when they met up.

Contains: Growth, Hyper Pregnancy, Hyper Dick, Wardrobe Malfunction, Excessive Cum, Macro, Destruction, Lactation, R63, Self-cest

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heck, even sun was being

The sun, I think you meant?

You've outdone yourself in the best possible way.

Lordy this was hot as hell, great work

I didn't think there would be worldbuilding in a clopfic, but good job anyway. I'm not into anthro, but you made it work somehow.

OK so far so good lets see whats next.i little confused though.

OMG This getting better and better .I can't wait to see what happens next.

This justblow my mind I loved it all.

that was a sweet read hope for a squeal and maybe the other ailcorns can meet there other,
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It took me forever to read this first chapter because it was so hot. Finally survived. Absolutely love it man.

Never understood the whole inflation fetish thing. It's weird to me. I'll keep reading to see where this goes, though.

Well.
Um.
Huh.

I think I can say without a shadow of a doubt that this is the single most strange and ridiculous piece of fiction (of any sort) which I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and I've read Heart of Darkness. :rainbowderp:

Not that I'm saying this is bad or anything, I read that kink list and basically thought: allllriiiiiiiight. :eeyup:

That being said I did find the nigh-constant descriptions of increasing size to be someone distracting from the sexiness, although someone more into macro may feel differently.

So, congrats on giving me a mildly confused boner, and for giving me certain suspicions regarding what the future has in store for Velvet in Rule of Three! :rainbowlaugh:

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