• Published 23rd Jan 2016
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Maid to Order - AzureDreamer



Rarity hires Lightning Dust on as her new maid, but before she can get to cleaning, Rarity decides she needs a much more -fitting- uniform. Smut ensues.

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Comments ( 17 )

Good lord is another sequel in the works?

6865577 Why is this being downvoted? It's a simple statement of fact.

Hmm. I guess growth+macro is still not my fetish. Oh well. It's not horribly written and is probably close to or on the money for people who do like growth+macro, so have an upvote anyway.

Also, I was amused by the company name and cleaners at the end. :rainbowwild:

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Not necessarily a fact. Here's a link to the relevant rules.

This really makes no sense, so much destruction just for one afternoon of pleasure? To keep this Rarity satisfied would take an entire town's economy!

I would also complain about the breaking of the laws of physics, but that's what magic is all about. However considering how much mass she generated from a clothing's enchantment, I'd say she just gave the laws of magic the middle finger.

Sorry, but stuff like this is just so hard to enjoy when it's so rediculous. I did like the consentual plot twist at the end, but believing it wasn't consentual for most of it kind of ruined it for me too. Well written though.

Not a huge fan of the macro, to be honest.... I really wanted to like it but I think the story could have been a lot better without it. Just my opinion though.

That's some good shit right there.

6871191 The Gryphon story was okay, she ended up being 11.5 feet tall sure, but that's somewhat believable. When a fetish gets to a point where it does ridiculous ammounts of damage and affects maybe dozens of other people, you have to ask, what's the point?

6873609 I guess you're right. I wouldd have preferred this story take place outside of town or something though. Destruction of ones own things is fine, but I don't think Rarity is rude enough to disrupt so many other posies lives. Maybe that's what I had a problem with, I don't know, just kind of rubbed me the wrong way. Had this happened in a way that wasn't disrespectful to everyone around them, I would not have said anything.

6873661 It was kind of implied though, Rarity observed that the ponies around her looked nervous, that she thought they'd be used to it by now. This also implies that it happens a lot and that the ponies aren't too happy about it. I guess you're right though, it is only an implication. Like I said before, it is well written. I actually don't mind a bit of size play, but usually only to the degree used in the Gilda story.

*sigh* Why can't these story ever have any penetration?

"The boutique crumbled behind her, bulldozed by Rarity's expanding rear"

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7002784 there's penetration in sex on the beach and in dinky doo's big adventure.

I can imagine her genderbending the Flim Flam brothers and make them have sex with each other.

Well, that was hot. That ending though... Poor Rainbow Dash. XD

I hope that if there IS a third one, it involves RD turning things around on Rarity and becoming HER master.

Why is it so much futa here is there an option to remove it when i search?

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