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Our job is not to give readers what they want; our job is to show them things they never imagined. --Walt Williams

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Seventy years after the show, the Elements of Harmony have been stolen. The thieves left no trace, not so much as a single clue to follow. The only lead: a single pony who happened to see them leave. But with the threat of violence if she talks hanging over her head, she's scared and in hiding. Fearing for the safety of Equestria, Celestia and Luna dispatch a small set of ponies, led by royal guard Iron Phalanx, to track her down, find out what she knows, and, above all, keep her safe.

But you don't steal the Elements unless you're up to something big, and the thieves aren't keen on letting that something get out so easily. As they do their best to impede the group's progress, other machinations run, their motives unknown, and the first strike, an attempted invasion of Canterlot Castle, is just the tip of the iceberg. Every lead simply opens more questions as ever more unlikely links are found.

Phalanx and his group aren't deterred by this. Not in the slightest. But the more clues they uncover, the more it's clear the rabbit hole goes far deeper than anyone realizes...

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 5 )

Omgosh. This story is so good!! Keep on!

The name "Night Owls" made me thing it was a story about Vanossgaming's super sero "Night Owl"... but now I remember he renamed him to Bat-owl.
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Yeah, not a important commentary here :eeyup:

Hmm - been about five years. If you're pretty sure you'll never finish the story, perhaps you could post a short (spoilered) synopsis of the remainder of the story? Like, who was behind everything and to what end, and so forth.

Also, I liked the story, but most everyone in it was terminally stupid. Ignoring clues and bad feelings and dismissing reasonable fears as "paranoia"...repeatedly. Calling each other by name when infiltrating a castle. Drawing everything but the obvious conclusions. I was pretty convinced some of those people were traitors, because they couldn't possibly be that blind unless they were trying. Still not convinced they all AREN'T traitors, really. Aside from the frustrating terminal stupidity, though, I liked it.

Galeblazer grinned. “You know the old saw about butterflies and hurricanes? I’m a butterfly.”

Huh, would be neat if pegasus magic worked by allowing one to know which small actions would cause large changes in the weather, thereby overcoming the chaotic-ness of it.

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