The Following is my headcanon until the new season of MLP comes end of this year beginning of the next. I was inspired to do this after watching the Season 5 Finale and seeing some of my Favorite Villains make a comeback. this is currently a work in progress. so ill upload later chapters when their finished. In this Story, Twilight Takes it upon herself to at least FIX 2 of the TImelines by Finding the Elements to Harmony and together with Alternate versions of her friends and use them to restore order and save whats left of Equestria. More chapters to come at a later date. I hope this Description is long enough.
you need an editor, grammar issues kill me
6712315 his grammer doesn't kill me
6713856 this is my oppinion. Not yours. I am just trying to help him. I did not dislike it because I liked the story line...
6714720 ok
im pretty sure my next one will be better :)
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Feel free to share my story with others. I'm still working on the next several chapters. i like your optimism of how my grammar " doesnt kill" you. :)
6746354 your welcome
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I just went and fixed a few errors in the first 2 chapters/pages. feel free to double check them in case i missed something ok? :D I'm working on another story atm. This one I'm writing down in a notebook before transcribing to computer. I'll let you know when i'm done. ttyl man.
6781378 ok
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I dare you to go back and read my stories now. Fixed a few issues but dont expect perfection ok .
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I went a added a few things and fixed a few errors in this story. dont forget to check out my other 2 when you have free time.
6948798 alright!
6948800 ok
7566266 and yet you couldn't be bothered to pick up on the GAME OF THRONES reference i threw in there??? Why do i bother trying to write when people are just gonna be Pretentious and whine about how i repeated that Starlight regretted it all. Apparently i need to stop expecting people to just read the damn story and leave a comment on what they liked about it, and what needs work.
Before I read, what is the Dark tag for ?
7790065 One or more of the alternate timelines are bleak, And Starlight has some bad stuff happen to her alternate selves a few times. When you read a few chapters, you might see why i added it.
Wow. Don't I feel like an asshat.
Sorry. I'll delete the other comment.
ok XD