Foxxy, thats me, I write and shit, rap, make music. Request something and I'll do it. I collab a lot with Magicolt808 and silversky
The ponies are droppin dope rhymes with nasty flows.
Decided to take a break from serious shit, and I've been told I'm not bad at rapping.
No editors on this project, just a little side thing, You can request characters for the part 2, drop me a comment or PM
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Urghhh haha
Its so hard cause I don't know what song you're listening to when you wrote this.
I just used http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J3r-ct0haZg cause it seemed to go with anything.
In my opinion, Twilight's was the best. But still, you should put an instrumental so people have something to refer to.
and if someone actually recorded these raps
IT WOULD BE EVEN MORE AWESOME
Tried rappin laughed to hard Lyrics to hardcore and funny
I started rapping them while my friend was round my house. I think it had the desired effect.
That was hilarious.
I'm-a favouriting this one!
--TwilitLightning
I think of without me by eminem
Hmm. I liked it a lot.
But if I had to drop any sort of criticism/suggestions, I would say to go by fours or twos. (e.g 4/4 time, 1/2 time, 2/4 time). It's the most common time signature in music, and both hip-hop and rap flourish when accompanied by a good beat. Also, in a lot of music, sometimes *something* changes every 4/8 measures (or 16/32 beats). It's basically natural to progress like that. But that's not really too big of a deal in the grand scheme of things.
I find that when I write bars/lines, it helps to focus more on the message than the rhyme. Take a fine Hip-Hop artist (e.g Dumbfoundead, Intuition, Wax, etc.) and you will find verses that do not rhyme. And that is completely fine, because they push their message/theme across so well over their words.
Once again though, I thought it was well done, so nothing I've said is to be seen in a negative light. (Wish I'd have thought of it first,
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Character Request(s): Vinyl (as the MC/DJ), Octavia & Lyra.
Oh shit, son! That was awesome. Sucks that it was only a one shot.
wait...
"Incomplete"
WOO!
BRILLIANT! So doing a reading of this! XD just too funny man! Really well done!
Applejack is best rapper. Fluttershy is best rhymesmith. Pinkie is best pop-rap artist, which is saying abolutely nothing.
If I weren't on a phone, I'd make this comment some sort of rap.
awesome...wait who won?
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I must agree
Umm… since I did so well in rapping this when you linked this to me, should I record myself rapping and post it on youtube for you foxxy?
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It was hard because I listened to a variety of instrumentals
If it helps, I was thinking of doing a video for it.
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Alright, I'll be doing your suggestions and more in the part 2.
I'll eat the rhyming scheme to something simple for the readers.
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I'm surprised you had to ask....
clearly fluttershy
696395 HEY ASSHOLE!!!!! DID YOU SEE MY COMMENT OR NOT YOU CUM GUZZLING DUMPSTER WHORE!!!!!!!?????
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I've also listened to you rap, and I also know what instrumentals go with it lol
We could alternate parts though if you want. Magic you know I love you
I seriously can't believe I rapped that whole thing last night for you and you didn't even consider me.
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"We can alternate" Is more than considering, it's pretty much saying, yes you can.
I also rap the whole thing, I just did it my head, while I wrote it.
696515 But I did it out loud!
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Nah, we can each do three.
Yo Magic rap it hard!
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I wrote everything lol
If people want a part 3 than sure, why the hell not
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MOAR!
If you do go with chapter three, will it be another partner rap like this, or single contestants? Maybe a villain rap battle?
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What does the reader desire?
Yes! MOAR! God, where'd I leave my MOARtar...?
And I support a rap battle between Equestria's villians, Nightmare Moon, Discord, Queen of bla- I mean Queen Chrysalis
(Jeez those Queens are like fucking sisters when one thinks too hard on it.)
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i agree with this guy. all the villains in a battle. Discord, Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, Flim and Flam, and any other villains you can think of.
That. Was. AWESOME!
Can Celestia strike back?
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You bet your sweet ass she can
EPIC!!!!!
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Keep an eye out for part 4...
*cough cough* and the upcoming video were making off this. *cough*
Started without me I see.
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Finished without you too lol
Go to the chat
Flim and Flam going up against Nightmare Moon, Discord, and Queen Chrysalis?
Thats like pitting a pair of twins against three fuckin battleships of doom, and one of them is upside down.
And a video you say?
Dis gon b good! I demand you inform us of it's release when that time arrives! 
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Flim and Flam are very conceded, and put themselves in the same category lol
I shall, I shall
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EPIC!
LOL, this is sick, you should do one for the minorities like the dragons or the chief buffalo
btw FAUST
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Next one possibilities,
Doctor Whooves
Spike
Trixie
Whatevers lol
707249 What about the Cutie Mark Crusaders
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yesyesyesyes
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is best rapper next to vinly
one more chapter coming up with tons of other characters
Not sure if it was celestia rapping them into a coma or Molestia raping their sorry asses.
Downvoted. Rap doesn't require profanity in every line to be good. In fact, it's better without it.
Personally, I think there's enough language here to merit a Mature rating.
I freaken love these raps
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As in language and ideals. If you didn't want to see bad words you shouldnt have click on this .-.
These are pretty sick.