A single word appeared in Sunset Shimmers journal. Help. A simple word with a complicated meaning. She knew Princess Twilight was in trouble. The only way to find out what happened, the one thing she avoided for so many moons, can only be her return to Equestria.
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It looks ver promising, you have yourself someone following the story now.
7/10
Happy New Year everybody. I m sorry to have waited so long to continue the story but the holidays were crazy busy. The next chapter should come much sooner.
Nope, you were the pony that stole other ponies cutie marks, because you got your feelings hurt when you were a filly.
Harmony.
That's always been my headcannon for Sunset becoming an alicorn.
Her cutie mark is a yin/yang symbol as well as a sun after all.
Some spelling mistakes, nothing that couldn't be fixed with a proofreader.
8/10
Does anyone think that Starlight's actions are somewhat suspicious in this chapter? Cause I noticed that.
"... are you crazy?!"
I moustache you to continue!
Guardian of Harmony
Makes sense. Her cutie mark is like a Ying and Yang only a sun.
7/10
Denise seems a little much & dark ... try another word please
I though SS was still in Equestria .... oh wait
human world SS. that is so confusing
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
...It's nice to see that Sunset and Diamond are friends.
Is it me or do all geniuses in fiction idolize Albert Einstein?
What kinda crossover is this fic anyway!?
It should look like a giant flyswatter. To rub salt in it, teach it to Shining Armor.
7282148 I would like that. It makes sense that changelings look a bit like flies.
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Well, it's either him, or Agatha Heterodyne.
sweeeet!
I'm liking it!
if u need an editor just ask i see a few problems in your writing
7263055 A crossover between EQG and the show would be my guess.
Rise against has a song named "rumours of my demise have been greatly exaggerated." Did you reference that in Sunset's dialogue or is it coincidental?
Sooooo dead fic?
Ooooo i like were this os going!
Awww so cute! Her and diamond do have stuff in common
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Burn! Lol i love sunset
Eeeee so cool!
Wow way to go human twi!
I love love love sunsets new role!
Time to use my imagination to fill in the rest. It will give something to think of at work. Chasiering is boring so i let my imagination run wild. No gona wirte it thugh
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Think you could do a version of your own?
dead fic is sadly dead.
Why!?😭Why is it that the good ones are nostly incomplete or uncontinued😭 Please continue🙏😭
that sounds familiar for some reason
that would give you nightmares for sure
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GIRL GENIUS
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I've noticed that too
When will next Chapter?
no- please continue this this is amazing