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Harmony Split

Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving



This story is a sequel to LT: For the rest of our life

Story number four from the Lunar Tales

Equestria, the land of harmony. But how could such a land exist for a thousand years? The short and sweet of it is: it can’t. The price of peace is often bloodshed and violence.

It is the bat-ponies that pay this price, that keep Equestria peaceful and harmonious. They operate without the knowledge of the other races. With the help of the princesses, they’ve maintained this façade for a thousand years. However, even with their centuries of experience not even the princesses are experts at war. They’re good at it, great even, but it’s not their talent.

When a mare emerges whose special talent is war itself, she is quickly elevated through the ranks to put her talents to use for the good of all of Equestria. But for one to command, they must have the unwavering trust of everyone under them. Can Celestia give her this trust?

And if not, who will pay the price for it?

Thanks to TwiDash for the pre-read
Thanks to VitalSpark for the edits!

Cover by zedrin

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Comments ( 5 )

can not hit favorite fast enough

Celestia, you REMF! Quit messing up the battles!

Way to keep me on the edge of my seat with this one, ScratchnTavi!

Ceelstia :facehoof::twilightangry2:

i hope that Luna also had words for you. You just cost Equestria 18 of the finest ponies it had because you lacked trust.

Wow, I was about to find a way into this story and kill that tyrant Celestia.

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